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@lightoverdarkness6 😊 u wanna RP Matt’s response? Lyla can also say something to Luna if u like.

@koshka u on?

@lightoverdarkness6

Overall I really liked it! Thanks for sharing it with us!

About the general dynamic, I don’t know what you have planned for the future, I thought the ending scene with the hot sauce didn’t make a lot of sense. It’s only for revenge, and I think pretty much all abused kids (whether emotional or physical) would not react that…[Read more]

I just don’t really like critiquing ppl unless they ask for a certain thing and then Ik what to critique, or if I see a certain story element that doesn’t make sense

@lightoverdarkness6 oooof…I usually don’t give critiques much just cuz I don’t really care too except for when they ask for like a CERTAIN thing, or if I just see something story wise if that makes sense XD….

@lightoverdarkness6 aww poor kids! I like it! Luv Asher obviously 😂 their sibling relationship is so sweet!

@whalekeeper

Ah, I see. I’m not sure though, maybe they do. I haven’t come across an explanation yet, but I did see it done, just the last letter in a name.

I may need to come back to this after some study.

@godlyfantasy12

Whatever you like! I would love to hear your ideas. (Or should that be read?)

@lightoverdarkness6 aww thx!

@lightoverdarkness6 aww thx!!! Ahhh I feel like Matt and Pax are totally gonna bond over their shared stutters 😭 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin

Paxton

Paxton’s eyes widened slightly as the young boy asked about his bear, his words stumbling out, just like Paxton’s often did.

He…sounded just like him. Though, a tad braver.

Paxton glanced at Lu…[Read more]

@felicity 😁

@godlyfantasy12

Id love to hear your ideas! But if you want to save them and share the draft later, thats fine too!

@whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @starofthenorth @arien @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin @sarafini gasp I never added @felicity to this!!

So, if I do this it’ll obviously still be being written after Christmas is over 😂

I gotta figure out how to start it and everything, so if y’all wouldn’t mind…[Read more]

@folith-feolin as I don’t read grimdark but I do know it’s definitely not something I’d probably read really at all, KOTLC, definitely isn’t as intense probably as what ur used to.

which is great for me XD XD XD

@mineralizedwritings yup! Her name is Hope! She’s been through a lot, just like Paxton, so he feels so attached to her.

@godlyfantasy12

We can wait for light!

Ok, so Paxton has a teddy? 😭 too cute!

(Kaine has a fox sttuffie) XD

@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6

Gonna wait to RP till @lightoverdarkness6 RPs for Matt and his sis.

@folith-feolin u might wanna read book7-9 now that they’re out 😉)

@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings

Luna

Tauren walked them over to the others, and as he did another boy walked out from them, eyes wary as he looked at them.

“Who are you?” He asked.

Luna felt Paxton bristle beside her. She held her smile, hoping the boy’s bit of hospitality would fade.

“U-Uh…Carter, this is Dolunay…”…[Read more]

@esther-c you’re good!

Jocelyn

“We’re looking for our friends,” Lyn answered, allowing Nyx to adjust in her hold. “We all got separated a few moments ago.” She decided to leave out the strange explosion, considering they’d already been freaked out by Nyx’s speaking.

“Oh? What do they look like? Maybe we’ve seen them!” Amidala smiled, looki…[Read more]