Mallory O'Bier

@brandon-miller There’s a sci-fi month!!! AAAIII!!! I can’t wait!

@holly-nelson-gray Aloha!
Dialogue I think is probably more important than description, though description is definitely important. Dialogue shows how the characters interact with each other, and it can also add a bit of setting as well. As for description, you can have some, just be sure to avoid info-dumps. I always skip those. I read a book…[Read more]

@Dragon-snapper personally I love chapter titles, as long as they don’t give away spoilers for the chapter. 😛

@anne-of-lothlorien That’s an amazing little story, Anne! I loved it! I also love how her name is Ali, similar to Alice 😉

@jadamae Haha! Yes, I know what you mean. “In Which I Fall in Love” isn’t spoilery at all, is it? (I’ve read a book with that exact chapter title.)

@daeus @graciegirl I’m done for now. My mom and I edited a short story, then I entered it into a contest.

Alrighty! Thanks everyone for your wonderful critiques! I have submitted the final draft into the contest, so we’ll see what happens. I’ll know on the 26 whether I’ve won or not. Again, thank you all!

@dragon-snapper @graciegirl Stopping a bit early. I edited about 2,100 words.

Back.

Have to go again. Be back in a min.

@daeus Hi again. 😀

@dragon-snapper I’m back.

@dragon-snapper Just a moment. I’ll be back in 5.

@Daeus ‘Sup.

@winter-rose @delightinlife @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @jess @audrey-caylin @dragon-snapper @graciegirl I’m writing till 9.

@delightinlife Ooh yay! Chocolate! Thank you for the motivation. 😛 This one is harder than my last.

@winter-rose @daeus @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @jess @northerner @anyone
I’ll be writing the sequel to LKD if anyone wants to join me.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 welp, I am now. 😛 Did you have a question?

@Rachelle yes, some. Though mostly physical drawing… how much are those programs, do you know?

@Rachelle yes, some. Though mostly physical drawing… how much are those programs, do you know?