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@anne-of-lothlorien This is great!!! You’re character in Ali is great! Even from the beginning I feel terrible that she has to go through that with her family. I can’t wait to see what happens next!
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@anne-of-lothlorien That’s an amazing little story, Anne! I loved it! I also love how her name is Ali, similar to Alice 😉
Currently reading Les Miserables
@dragon-snapper I don’t know if there will be a ‘what happens next’. I can’t think of a way to continue or prelude her story without ruining it.
ENFP - "One must be sane to think clearly, but one can think deeply and be quite insane."
@anne-of-lothlorien Hmm…maybe Dean isn’t actually a friendly. Ooh! Maybe he’s the Mad Hatter! Maybe he kidnaps her!
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“a friendly”…
Hmmm, I like that word. Friendly as a noun…
My friend and I came up with a new word. Starealyze, pronounced just like sterilize. It means to paralyze someone by staring at them. (Which I can do quite well). Stare + Paralyze = Starealyze.
ENFP - "One must be sane to think clearly, but one can think deeply and be quite insane."
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