Orielle2023

@loopylin

Thank you! <3

Lol yeah… I’m taking college chemistry and I’ve never had a in depth chemistry course before. I mean I knew what electrons were…?

@whalekeeper

Lol he’s embarrassed by your immaturity? 😂😂

XD yes! I listen to the lofigirl synthwave radio 🤩 I used to listen to the normal one too, but I like the synthwave better. But tbh, I can’t listen to it for more than 2 hours a day because it’s a little too much.

I still do not have a phone, and everyone else in the homeschool group does…

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@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76

yeah let’s make up a villain!Or maybe we just throw them into a mind games labyrinth they have to escape together? XD maybe it needs a key but you have to find the bad guy who will give you the key?

@trailblazor

Yeah that makes sense! When I’m by myself, I’m a lot more attentive to safety/my surroundings than when I’m with somebody else, and that takes a lot of mental energy, so yeah the busier the store the more overstimulating would make sense.

@whalekeeper

*Shrug* 😅 I have five younger siblings, a sick mum, and late high school anxiety, so… yeah.

Oh wow XD You’re the oldest? That’s a full house lol

I just feel frustrated with my place in life, where I know I could do more if I was in a different environment. Don’t get me wrong, I love my family, but we’re not a naturally academic lot,…

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@whalekeeper

That is such a Tauren joke, oh my goodness 🤣🤣 Sweet child, he definitely needs that line in your final draft!

XD I’m glad you like it!

Right 😊 Lots of writing only sounds good if it connects to your inner turmoil (for lack of a better description 😂). I did not cry, but I could relate to that unsteady feeling of life changing, and a…

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@whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @loopylin @anyone else

(ignore if you like)

I might change this chapter I’m not sure…. but it’s just some of the writing I’ve been doing this November!

“Alright here we go! Let’s make it a good day!” Aleshia smiles, typing her apron behind her back. She smiles at Lesli, but with slightly less…

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I tend to name chapters based on the lesson learned or progress to character arcs. For instance, instead of naming a chapter on the physical things that happened (visiting the bakery) I would rather name it based on the conversation the characters had at the bakery (Such as… “If you only understood”)

Hope that helps 🙂

@whalekeeper

That’s so cool! It obviously makes sense to happen, but it must be strange looking back and reading into yourself like that. In a good way, of course! 😂 So much to learn from.

yeah, really strange!

It’s also fun when your younger self surprises you with something really well written, or a good joke 😂 Because now that you’re in the f…

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@freedomwriter76

I just realized something so interesting about my wip and I have to share it XD

Ok so I was rereading my first draft for fun, and weirdly enough the emotional descriptions are better than most of my current writing, but the plot is a total mess with no direction.

What’s weird is that the whole vibe of my first draft is…[Read more]

@smiley

Yes Bucky def needs more fun 🥺🥺

@freedomwriter76

Yw. XD

Sarah does seem a lot more stable than Yelena 😭

@freedomwriter76

I actually agree Bucky and Sarah is cuter XD

Yelena has such a strong personality compared to Bucky I’m not sure it would really work.

Oh wait I just scrolled up and I see it is ai generated XD

@freedomwriter76

Awww I love it! Is that one with him holding ryo ai generated? How did you find that? It’s so cute!

@whalekeeper

<3 yw!

I would try doing a black outline on another layer, then selecting the little checkerboard box (idk what it looks like in your program, it’s usually a checkerboard. It’s the one that makes it so you can only color on what’s already there) If you have that selected, you can use a brush too change the color of the outline,…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Aww so sadddd

Also, it’s a Riker aesthetic with a Bucky quote!!

@esther-c

Hmm… the overcoming problems too easily really could be a problem. Something that I think would help is making the problems in general take up more space. A characters struggle should snowball as a result of their own bad choices, which reflect their major flaw they hope to overcome. The general problem should not come up quickly…[Read more]

@loopylin

Aww he’s so cute!

yeah I get that lol…

@whalekeeper

I love your coloring style! It’s kinda… ethereal?

I think the lineart is fine for your style, but if you wanted to change it I would recommend using a pen and trying to make the whole thing one continues line, instead of having the sketchy kinda “feathery” lines. There’s nothing wrong with the way you’re doing it though!

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