Orielle2023

@freedomwriter76

😆 Moodboards seen alot more fun than my algebra 2 homework…. Yeah I see how the procrastinating starts lol.

@whalekeeper

Your descriptive writing is so good! I could really imagine it. I absolutely love the line ,”More than dirt would soon be under those nails.” I personally could not have read that at 12-14 years old, but I was a really sensitive kid lol, I’m sure some on that age range would love it.

Does Axel get free eventually?

Unfortunately the internet ate my post and your reply before I could pet your dragon. 🙁

*pets dragon*

my story would be sunset colors! Or if moonlight was a color, I’d pick that lol. what color is yours?

He looks so great! You draw noses so well! XD   Probably one of the ultimate challenges of drawing, especially when your drawing in a more realistic style like that. The way the drawing “ends” works really well! Sometimes it’s hard to find a way to fade it out when just drawing the top half of somebody.

What is his personality like?

Ayyee! Another dystopian writer!!!

Sounds good! Raine sounds really intriguing, you got me wondering what kind a person he is. Love the name, by the way. I’m not that far into writing so I don’t feel qualified to give a critique, but curious to see where you take that!

the moodboard looks great too!

I’ve never made one before but They sure…[Read more]

Thanks! He doesn’t die. I think the percentage was scewed, not sure the doctor has his best intent in mind (I know that sounds awful, it’s not as dark as it sounds.) I might change that part though…not sure I want to go there.

I’ll have to consider finding a better place for the part about Lesli’s parents, yeah it doesn’t flow great.

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@jenwriter17

I know this thread hasn’t been posted on since nearly a year ago..

but imma answer anyway! XD

I love drawing manga style and for the last year or so, it was nearly all I did. I was completely obsessed lol. I find that drawing from manga references really helped me get my proportions down better, because of the simplified nature of…[Read more]

HELLOOOO @rose-everdeen!

I could have recognized your account simply from the profile picture! Love your style, lol it’s so distinct I would know it anywhere. Great to see you here too!!! XDDD

Hi @Elishavet!

Great to meet you to!

Hmm…  is the flower good…   lol, I’ll tell you. I like to think I can wait to tell people, but I love giving spoilers too much. It’s a flower that only grows well in darkness (!would thrive in a closet!) So you don’t see them often, only in places that aren’t well lit. It’s fine until it blooms. You c…[Read more]

Hi!

(Am I aloud to say welcome, having been here for less time than you? lol)

I love the title of your story! The whole thing sounds really good.

I know nothing of medieval history but it sounds like such a fascinating topic.  I totally get having your characters yelling opinions/sulking in corners, except mine just stare at the ground…[Read more]

Also, if you just want to skip  to the second chapter to read what i wrote, you can. You don’t need to read the first chapter to understand the second chapter.

@anne-of-lothlorien @gretald @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @anatra23 @joy-caroline @devastate-lasting @elfwing @elanor @e-k-seaver @trahia-the-minstrel @william-starkey @abigail-m @thelobsterlover @gracie-j @r-m-archer @power @kathleenramm @morgan @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-who-wants-to-bash-my-writing…[Read more]

@r-m-archer

Thanks for helping me understand a bit better!

Also, sorry if I sounded a bit “un-gracious” there, but I guess what I meant wasn’t anything against the author, but the story. (I’m also a terrible writer, and it would indeed be bad news for me if the notion of improvement didn’t exist). So to rephrase: If the characters, world, an…[Read more]