Orielle2023

@felicity

Lol yes, it’s a fun topic. Glad you are feeling better!!

@theloonyone @loopylin

The Guy Womback/Womack story is hilarious! Your family reunions must have been something else if all your cousins were coming up with morbid thriller stories!!!! 🤣  The imaginations of childhood….

@freedomwriter76

Ok Ok I didnt cry… 🤣 but like I could feel the water in the back of my eyes a little.

That was so sad!

The ending scene was really sweet. love this!

I feel like Wolfgang’s happy soul needs to be protected 😂.

@theloonyone @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @starofthenorth @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @am I missing anyone on this topic?

Hello again, amazing, talented people!!! Unfortunately I got sick on Monday so I haven’t been on here since, but I’m finally starting to feel better! (my head’s cleared enough to be able to make coherent…[Read more]

@theloonyone

LOL that”s the best 😂

Oh, you are wrong

@theloonyone

That’s how I know I’m onto things… 🤐🤐

Yeah… 🤨

@theloonyone

Um… good for you? 🤨😂

Yeah… 🤨

Ooh… these friends… 😬

Yeah… 🤨

I loved the chapter! And I don’t like those friends 😒 But I love Lesli and Tauren! I’ve got mixed feelings about Keiryn

LOL exactly how I wanted you guys to feel 🤣.

😍 Tauren’s here!! maybe 🙂

Yeah…🤨

(Yeah…🤨 is my new way of saying HMMMM 🤐&#x…

@arien

LOL that was really cute 😂

A buffalo buffing really does seem like something a kid would come up with. And tbh the dialogue was really good for 8 or 9 years old. I don’t even know if I knew what a council was at 8 🤣

@arien

Lol yes! My story is partially inspired by the city of ember. LOVE LOVE LOVED that book growing up. I didn’t actually realize the parallels until quite awhile through plotting 😅

Good job!

Thanks!😁

HEHE I wonder what Keiryn was doing in the mines? 🤨

Go on, Lesli, just give him a big hug in front of everyone, they don’t matter! 😊😍

Lol y…[Read more]

@loopylin

Sure! Do whatever you need to. I’d just like Everly and Kaine to stick to together.

@starofthenorth

No worries, thanks for reading!

So sorry it took me so long to reply! I LOVE it!! Great job!

And I like your drawing style, too.

Thank you! Glad you like it! 😁

@mineralizedwritings

So sorry it took me so long to reply! I LOVE it!! Great job!

And I like your drawing style, too.

Keep it up!!😊😁

@theloonyone @everyone else on this topic

I pulled out some more old writing. This is 11-year-old me trying to write a romance, by the way. 😝😍

In this scene, Irene was just met one of her suitors, Nicholas. He escorts her to her rooms.

When we arrived at my door, he said, “Well, here thou art, Lady. I shall see the sometime in the near future.”…

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@lightoverdarkness6

LOL Mount Everest XDXD

@freedomwriter76

So sorry it took me so long to respond!

I don’t know what era I like best. I call history my least favorite sub next in school, but that is the fault of the curriculum I use . . . I like history itself.

You’re totally welcome!!!

@freedomwriter76

I love all the brothers (not the step brothers) soooo much!

That was really good! Can’t wait to read more 😁

Also, she’s not there actual mom is she… I was going to ask at the beginning if they were adopted.

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, I kinda detected that…makes me dislike them even more…just being honest…XD

You are free to dislike them. I don’t like them either. 🤣

Of course!!! He’s so sweet and wonderful!!! <333

Yeah! Lol that’s what I was hoping to get across! 😀

@freedomwriter76

I LOVE IT!!! <3333

Thank you! <33

And wow…they don’t seem very nice. XD Very judging. Lesli…don’t hang out with this friend group…just…don’t…XD If they change, sure, but otherwise…XD

Yeah… not the best people lol.

(I’m just unhappy how they talked about Tauren, lol…XD)

LOL SAME XD

Long story short, I love Tauren. XD

YAY!…[Read more]

@theloonyone @loopylin @freedomwriter76@lightoverdarkness6 @folith-feolin @whalekeeper @felicity @anyone @arien @starofthenorth

(Pls read chapter 3 first if you haven’t 😀)

Chapter 4

“Dad I’m going to go hang out with some friends.” Keiryn calls into the living room from the door.

Lesli glances up briefly from her writing, but quickly glanc…[Read more]