Orielle2023

Alexander: (Briana’s twin brother)

I had a hard time finding a picture for him! This is the closest match.

@lightoverdarkness6 @everyone

Yay! I’ve posted three of my characters, but I’m post the others!

Andrea: (Christopher’s sister, 14 yrs old)

Isn’t she pretty?

@mineralizedwritings

woah!! That was amazing! I would love to read the entire book when or if you publish! I’m hooked 😊.

That’s great!! I mean, it sounds violent, but I’m glad you’re hooked! 😀

So many of your people descriptions are just on point! I never would have used, “sniffed defiantly at the world” but I understand exactly what he did and t…

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@esther-c

Yeah ok so…

Fynn and Destry have their Dad’s nose. Ami looks totally like her Mom!

Lukas looks like his Mom. Everton’s hard to place…I think I agree that he looks like his dad.

Analyzing fake families is now my favorite new hobby! 😀 😀

@lightoverdarkness6

Yeah!! They’re new. I actually just started writing chapter one of t…

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@mineralizedwritings

*twirls around singing “Tauren Forever!”*

@loopylin

That Johnny story sounds creepy…but fun too of course! 😀

 I like yours too! Very mysterious and keltic ✨

Thanks! <3

@felicity

Yeah lol! Those revisions can be rough. But I would never remove Tauren!

@esther-c

AHHHH!!

You did a great job on the cliffhanger….because I’m so anxious for all of them!!

@mineralizedwritings

Good, good! I’m glad you feel that way! I just wanted to see how far you were going with these revisions. Sometimes us writers can be ruthless to ourselves. 🤣

@theloonyone

XD Oh no!

I suppose Johnny has been through a lot then.

Or he went through a lot 😳

@whalekeeper

Thanks! That’s what other people have said too.

@felicity

Thanks!

Removing Tauren from the story!? I would never!😥🤣

He’s my sweet boi!

That would be tragic!

@esther-c

Oh! I’m so nervous for Ami! And gotta say, I love Everton. He’s kinda fun albet impulsive 😂

Great chapter!

@theloonyone

Yeah! He was cool.

@loopylin

Oh don’t mind if I ask…

Who is Johnny and what happened to him?

(Y’know? Your signature? XD)

@felicity

woah!! That was amazing! I would love to read the entire book when or if you publish! I’m hooked 😊.

Lyaksandro hunches his shoulders into the wind and sniffs defiantly at the world as we enter the school courtyard and part ways.

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@esther-c

Skyler and Fynn really look like siblings 😀 They’re both tilting their heads like so… I love it!

@mineralizedwritings

Ok! May I make announcement?

Of course! Anytime! 😀

Hmm…since I’m a short title kind of girl, I like The Afterthoughts. You could even go for one word if you wanted, Afterthoughts. I think that word is poignant and gives just enough information to get you to want more, like I’d start thinking, “What or who’s the…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

I know!!! That pic makes me break out in a grin every time I see it… *hugs Effie close while she squeals and wriggles*

Are Asher and Iris new characters or have I just never realized you had them?

I think I know somebody that looks kind of like him.

@lightoverdarkness6

I love that name too!! Aubrey. I now have two good friends named Aubrey!! One goes to my church, and then you! But you’re sweeter than her…don’t tell her 😊. I’d like to keep my life 😂😅.

Thanks! 😊

Oh dear XD

You want to keep your life?! 😂🤣

@mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @folith-feolin @koshka @lightoverdarkness6 @arien @starofthenorth @godlyfantasy12 @madelyn @wilder-w @sarafini @elishavet-pidyon @kathleen-ramm @esther-c @theloonyone

Here’s chapter three of my WIP Overcome if anyone’s interested!

Any feedback you might have is very welcome! 😀

Glossary of…[Read more]

@folith-feolin

Thanks! This is the first time I’ve tried writing in present tense and I’m enjoying it so far.