Orielle2023

@ligtoverdarkness6

Thanks!

@esther-c

ok, I’ll keep that in mind. The first book actually refers to something different from the other ones, the term afterthoughts is used to refer to a unwanted group of people, where as the other one literally mean thoughts. So maybe I should change it to m=not have parallel titles and instead have…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Ok yeah, that’s what it looks like. It sounds like the checklist is for what you would need to get published though, so lol I’m a little confused XD

And same! I might try to do some this summer, it seems like fun!

@whalekeeper

IKR? SO COOL! XD I want to see the short story checklist, idk why I can’t click it, I suppose it’s because it hasn’t launched yet?

@princesachronicle22

The first part was good! I don’t really read stuff that goes into that much detail about peoples torment XD So I stopped reading, but I’m sure it was great. Love your writing style btw!

@Thearcaneaxiom

Thanks! And thanks for the feedback 😀:)

@princesachronicle22

Thanks!!

@thearcaneaxiom @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @felicity

I’ve been thinking about the order of my books, how would this sound for titles?

Afterthoughts of Hate

Afterthoughts of a Releaser

Afterthoughts of The Left Behind

(Haven’t come up with a good title for the fourth yet…)

Honest opinions? Does it…[Read more]

@acancello

Nice! I would say it’s better, but the restaurant scene could have worked with some changes too.

I staggered over to an almond tree that was bent into the shape of a seat that was covered in moss and fallen flower petals and sunk down on it breathing hard.

I would make that sentence separated into two, it’s a little long.

@artsy-dragon

Very cool! I like the person!

@esther-c

oh, just finished it!

He let her lead him to the circle the group had made. Ev stood next to Lukas. He ruffled his hair and smiled down at his little brother. Lukas looked up and frowned.

“What?” Ev whispered.

“I’m a teenager,” Lukas replied.

Ev grinned. “I know. I’m supposed to embarrass my teenage little brother. Right?”

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@lightoverdarkness6

❤️❤️❤️

@artsy-dragon

Ooo I like the dragon!

@lightoverdarkness6

woah that was good! Super curious to know how that will play out!

@whalekeeper

XD sure! I think everyone calls me that now lol!

@freedomwriter76

XD yeah! The hurricane hair thing seems super in character, one of the clips I saw he was calling somebody sour patch XD it seemed so passive aggressive lol.  (very curious to know what happens next in the uh… hurricane hair saga should we call it?) lol

@freedomwriter76

Lol yes, it is fun. The acting is reallllly good. Like i think I can tell the difference between the clips I saw and other movies I’ve watched, it’s better.

@lightoverdarkness6

I was writing a scene with the word darkness in it and I instinctively wrote ‘darkness6’ because of your tag XD

@joy-calle

If I had all the time in the world I’d totally jump on it 🤣 it sounds like a blast and I’ve never really done anything like that before. I’ve got spring break in about… idk one month? That’s when I’ll have the most time.

@lightoverdarkness6

Yeah I know that feeling. Like kinda icky?

@lightoverdarkness6

Thanks! And yeah. sometimes a little frusterating.

@lightoverdarkness6

Oh ok! All I know about that is everyone loves Loki. XD I’ve done that before too, watch something then afterwards go eh…. idk about that.