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@rae

Aw thanks :]

I want to add Hugo, if that’s okay :] Dude cares about people and won’t bother anyone.

Barnes

The hallway went for quite some time, eventually opening into a complex of stairwells. Barnes passed one before quickly retracing her steps.

On the bottom of the stairs lay a person. It was Hugo, the young man who belonged to a horrible criminal org…[Read more]

Okay, anyone can bump into mine. I promise she doesn’t bite that hard.

Commissioner Barnes

A thin line of light fell over Barnes’ face, and she blinked behind her mask.

She leaned forward, and fell out of two swinging wardrobe doors, tripping on her petticoat. Her knees landed on solid stone floor.

The pain didn’t bother her quite as much…[Read more]

This is all speculating from reading books that do this; I’m no expert 😅

I know you already got help from Min and I don’t have much to say 🙂 But a couple things.

I keep using the same phrases to describe my character’s struggles, thought processes, or even how they’re interpreting the themes in their own lives.

It might help to not say those phrases at all. Brainstorm all the easiest ways to say your theme in the story…[Read more]

Little late here, but @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint great art from all three of you 🙃 Everyone keeps improving so quickly.

@keilah-h

Thx for the thoughts. The ending is already planned out and I will not reveal anything. 😁

@lightoverdarkness6

I’m so glad you approve of his scene!!! I was worried for a minute there because I don’t know what his everyday life is like.

@rae

and the twin I really want to rp with is a young teen, but he’s rather immature.

My charrie is pretty good at monitoring immature children. I’ll try to get her in here if my mind is apt enough; I’ve been in RP burnout for quite some time lol.

@mineralizedwritings

He does not need to fight at all! Yes, you can give me a little bio if you want to.

@calyhuge I have not forgotten where we left off Seb and your characters. Would rather not right now, I’m not in the current scene anyway. Thanks for the suggestion tho.

@freed_and_redeemed

Yaayyyy I’m glad I got them right!!

It’s also funny bc I was going to log on and ask if you were still working on this yesterday but decided against it XXXXD

Mood tho :’) I have the plot allll laid out, it’s just a matter of writing it in between senior projects and my creative stuff.

@loopylin

Dude don’t apologize. It’…

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@keilah-h

Were the people back in their worlds notified about the selection? Like, taking my charrie as an example, will Crosshair’s peers (the Empire, the Bad Batch, whoever he’s working with right now) be like “hey, what happened to him? He should be here by now” or did someone come to them and say “Your friend has been selected for a game of s…

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@freed_and_redeemed

(and just so you know, your fun little comedic WIP is amazing and still has wonderful characters and amazing lessons and values within it even though it’s ‘just for fun’ 😉🥰)

Thank you, I hope to give it some meaning :]

@linus-smallprint

I’m sorry for being kind of sarcastic, I was very moody at the time of writing that post.…[Read more]

@rae

AHEM… Does this mean what I think it does?? 😭

Yes, because I wasn’t sure when he would be back in the story xD.

Side note: I was listening to this song last night and it reminded me of your story, it’s called Lean on Me. I’m not sure who was singing it. ☺️

@keilah-h

Oh that’s so fun! Thanks for sharing😍😂 Yes, you can share music!! And the quote is all yours XD

@linus-smallprint

Oh someone wants to talk XD Okay

And yes, we should definitely avoid sinning, but that is not the only thing God requires of us. We are told to glorify God in what we eat and drink, and whatever else we do 1 Corinthians 10:31. This is a command, not a statement of the way things are. We need to actively seek to Glorify God. If…

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@rae

Okay, thank you! Yay, Mandin is back 😂 That’s totally fine! As long as you can keep writing from that point, you can always come back and change it once you’re done.

@theducktator That was so funny! Great job! I like the Shadow’s idea of her trying to break into a zoo and rescuing some birds, lol. Maybe an amusement park? A concert? A DMV?

I am a little worried I took some of the POVs too far in my imagination, and if I did, I’m sorry. Some of them I interpreted humorously without thinking much about their actual story 😅

@keilah-h

😃