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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Yeah, sometimes it looks different and the entire website doesn’t load, but it still works usually.
You 100% are!!
Nice. 😎
I feel like I’ve had a tone of those scenes though.
Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.
You have no ide…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
I got tagged for both of these, so I’m assuming it’s working again for the most part.
since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore,
I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.
Good section. I was right about them meeting the boy again, but wrong about him coming with them. Oh well.
When did Leon start calli…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
Probably not, I guess I just missed that.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
ack, yes, I missed a word there. When I read it over my brain said it was there. XD
XD Yep, happens to me too.
Okay, so Julian was about 17-19 in Joseph’s book (I never specified) which makes him in his late twenties now. Leon is a few years older so late twenties to very early thirties.
Rolf and Roland are around 19-25
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
Sorry, for some reason I didn’t get an email for this. 🙁
Good section! I like Julian’s reaction to Leon being the White Knight, and how they resolve their argument.
Julian raised an eyebrow. “I think that’s about the first time you have ever admitted I was better at you than something.”
Lol.
He knew this room very well. Leon…
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hybridlore replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
I read through it and loved it! I think it will really touch the heart of whoever is going to read it. Don’t let the enemy convince you otherwise. If the Holy Spirit is calling you to do this, you can do it. He’ll give you the strength.
My favorites were Story #2, #3, #5, and #6. For order, I would suggest maybe putting the…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 1 day ago
@savannah_grace2009
Sara, that sounds like a great idea!! I’ll try to read through it and give some feedback if I have any. You’ve got this!! -
hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 2 days ago
@theducktator
Praying!! -
hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 week, 2 days ago
Yayy!!!! Praise God!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
Yeah, that sounds about right. (It’s one of my favorite words 🤪). I’ll try to be mindful of it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 3 days ago
Okay, yay! Does Ellette have your email?
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whaley replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 week, 3 days ago
@grcr
Ah, I should have mentioned the skin. She’s got light skin, probably on the paler side to contrast the freckles. 😛 And you are fine to mess around with the shirt and shoes! -
whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 3 days ago
It’s funny… your shadowed eyes remind me of me. 😆 How many kitties do you have right now?
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whaley replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 week, 3 days ago
I already posted this on the other art topic, but the purpose of this is to improve. So, here it is again. 😅
This is probably just a matter of practice, but my lines aren’t very deliberate. Sometimes I go harder with the brush in places, and it’s just a matter of random impulse. In ‘educated’ art, it looks purposeful, but this doesn’t feel as p…[Read more] -
whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 3 days ago
Is that a partial face reveal I see? 🫢
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 week, 3 days ago
WOW!! Those are awesome!
Thx! 😊 I’m trying to get comfortable with the line of action and forming the mass of the figure around it. It should make my art easier to look at. That’s what they say… Must… get better… *Eye twitches*
I guess Pinterest is the place to go, then. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 week, 3 days ago
Yayyyy!! If you have trouble with her, take as long as you like, you’re the artist! <3
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whaley replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 week, 3 days ago
Aah I’ve never done this before, that I can remember. But I have a character! I love your art style and this sounds so fun! 🙃
Name: Izzy. But that might change.
Age: 15
Personality: Izzy is the definition of chill. She has a bit of a romantic dynamic with the main character, and she’s generally viewed as the quiet cool kid. She can be distant…[Read more] -
hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
Yes. I just hope it doesn’t lead to bad stuff for them.
I think you’re enjoying the suspense way too much. 🤔🙄
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