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Enid replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Gus
Gus froze, wobbling on one leg.
He swiveled his head at the voice, like a frightened deer, ears pricked up. “What d’you mean?”
Nyx’s eyes were mere slits, as he curled up tighter. “What you’re doing!! It’s… annoying.”
That didn’t make any sense whatsoever.
Gus stumbled back to two hooves, came closer, and mewled again, a…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
😂❤️ Your tiger could meet our characters at the stream!
Okay cool.
Yeah 😂 He knows he can’t figure out Nyx’ age, but just from the way he acts, Gus will assume he is inexperienced, and therefore uses that nickname. Honestly he calls any recruit of any age a babe, if they act immature 😂 So there’s the expla…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
How old is Nyx? Gus is around twelve to thirteen. He’s small for a human, but strongly built for one of his kind, so his appearance can be confusing to both sides.
Yep lol.
I guess for Nyx it was the isolation, in Cirque.
Whereas for Goosie, it was immediate shock, but then a slow training up to complete acceptance.
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Enid replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Gus
Nyx glanced around, before his ears wilted, nose tucked and sniffling quietly.
His spirits had caught cold as well.
Gus stuck his nose into the can.
The beans were mostly flavorless, but they were soft, solid, and sat nicely in the stomach.
After eating the lesser half, Gus licked his face and nose until his fur was clean…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Gus
Gus snickered softly when the fox exploded over being perceived as a babe. He played with the hem of his overalls, but purposefully said nothing back. After all, the fox was a babe, if only emotionally.
All new recruits were babes. And they had to get used to it real quick, without any smart mouth.
The fox scuffed up the…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I’ve been waiting for you to ask!!! You should join! It’s still morning, and I think classes have dropped to being casual now 😂
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
We could go to camp, and then have the dance right after, as a back-to-school celebration? We’d have to ask people tho
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Yeah XD We could start a separate RP where the characters go to camp together. It could be sponsored by Destina Tasin itself! How would it fit in the school timeline, though?
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
My characters would be totally out of their element in the wild XD
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Enid replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
It’s aliiiiive… it’s aliiiiive… IT’S ALIIIIVE
XD I’m sorry, I had to.
Gus
Gus stood up and slowly veered around the fire, white eyelashes fluttering as he tried to blink away the runes pressing against his cheeks. “Why are you so small? I’ve never seen such a tiny junebug in all my life before.”
Most Horns stood on their…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Lost Island (An Animal Fantasy RolePlay) in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
It’s okay!! Hard to keep track sometimes, yeah? Here, he’s set up a fire and Nyx can wake up 😊
Gus
Within roughly thirty minutes, red-hot embers were flickering in the air like the souls of fireflies. A small wood pile crackled as Gus sat on a log, staring up at the sky, where he knew there would be an abundance of beautiful sta…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Anyone Need Some Editing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Ofc!!
Probably just a structural kind of editing, to see how it flows and if anything feels off. 😊
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Well we’re supposed to stick close to the school… Otherwise it isn’t a school RP anymore.
Maybe you could visit a park?
Oh, and if you wanted, since you’ve got more of a medieval story, you could start a medieval roleplay. A lot of other writers on here have high fantasy characters. That would be cool.
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Enid replied to the topic Anyone Need Some Editing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Aw, thank you for the compliment! I read your chapter and the girl felt so alive in my mind. 😊
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Don’t set it on fire or anything too huge tho 😂 Idk if anyone would be able to keep up.
I want to explore the city a little because I essentially write suburban fantasy – I think other people do too – and this place has just so many opportunities!
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Enid replied to the topic Anyone Need Some Editing? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Oh my goodness, honestly I would love to get into editing as a profession and I’m seriously thinking about it! What books do you use?
And this is a great topic, because I’ve been wanting some pointers ever since… well, a couple months ago. There’s always room for improvement.
So Godly, feel free to tear my heart out and feed it to an…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12
Marcel
Marcel gave Riker a half-smile, and leaned to one side so Pax might see him.
Pax didn’t notice. He was staring wide-eyed at a bright screen, with a look of complete contentment, and held Leo’s hand.
Marcel brushed a strand of pink fluff out of his eyes. If you guys want… um… I’ll be at the old soda foun…[Read more]
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hybridlore posted an update 3 years ago
I read this quote a while ago, and it stuck with me because it felt so true, I guess. Something about how being a writer, you’re really putting yourself in three people’s minds. The author, the character, and the reader.
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Enid replied to the topic Sebastian Universe in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
Ah yes, the comically romantic fight scene 😂 And the prejudice and angst for Keida, naturally. She looks different, or has different powers?
Seb’s the opposite in a way. He never has any trouble looking like he belongs in his father’s dimension, even though he was born in another (and he always thought his mother had left them or something). But…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
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