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@rae

I’m not sure, but thanks!

Okay, got it. It all makes more sense now.

@loopylin @princesachronicle22

We did have our group of charries, me, Min, and Freedom. It just kinda slowed down. I say we find food. But idk who else actually likes describing a meal 😅🤪 Just me??

@loopylin @everyoneelse

😊 Babs is a little taller than Marcel, very round in features, with coppery eyes, orange and white hair, a bit of a pale complexion. I’ve changed her a lot from the original design. Those who knew her before this moment might get confused… which again, I apologize 😂

Also…

Again, @everyone

I’ve realized I cannot continu…[Read more]

Also, I use Canva! It’s really great for moodboards!

@rae

Lol. I like the descriptions you posted of nature!

Just wondering, cause I can’t think of any other way to do it XD

@aranel

What’s wrong with the characters dying because they just ran into the monsters?

@loopylin

O.O

I LOVE IT!! 😍❤️🤣 Oh my stars thank you so much, that cheered me up, it’s thAt cute. AAAUUURrGH it’s so adorable. *HugzyoubecauseIreallywantto* You’re so sweet 😊❤️

@rae

Oh and the paragraph about heaven and hell didn’t seem too preachy. I mean, I think it’s fine to have it in there since it was really short. Great job on the description of that, too! I think it works well.

@rae

I thought it ended really well, I liked the mentor-y moment with Master Paul! I didn’t really understand what Cubespace was entirely, so the whole incident confused me a little.

I think Master Paul asked Nahim to fly the ship, but Nahim said no, so the Master left him there on the controls? And then Nahim stabilized it and went to yell at…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, that’s happened to me too before!

@thearcaneaxiom

I like it! Thing is my favorite, lol. I don’t think you should change the name even though it’s a little mean, but it’s up to you. I think it fits her and she likes it, so it works.

The plot is a little confusing to me… a lot of the philosophy/science stuff goes over my head but that’s fine, lol. Anyway, nice job so far! I…[Read more]

@loopylin

DANTE.

He always makes me smile. Always.

@calyhuge

Wow you caught on fast. I’m kinda amazed

It wasn’t too hard 😂😋

@rae

Okay, phew! Finally caught up. And yeah, Chapter 7 isn’t showing up for me… so I guess I’m not, lol.

The biggest things I noticed were again, really long paragraphs. I think it would be easier to read if you split them up, but it’s up to you.

And long sections of dialogue without tags, like this:

“You can…”

“Read, write, and speak i…

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@jonas

Okay, I actually don’t think I’ll join… Thanks, though!

@calyhuge

…

Is Narana who I think she is?

@euodia-vision

Thank you!!

@trailblazer

I’ll check out your past posts and try to come up with some ideas!

@savannah_grace2009

If that is what happened, I bet she’ll try to rejoin… but I guess we’ll see.

@savannah_grace2009 @janellebelovedpig
Do you guys think it was an accident? Just really weird, she didn’t say anything about it. And she seemed like she was posting more often, too :/