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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 13 hours ago
I think so. Are you sure he couldn’t be a church leader at seventeenish, if he’s one of the only believers in that town?
If that’s what you’re leaning towards, then go for it. Maybe pray about it and think a little longer if it’s a hugeee chance, though.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 13 hours ago
Why does he have to become an elder? I think (if I’m understanding this right) if the important things are happening while he is seventeen, that’s where you want to be. Maybe he can be a part of the inner core group of the church without being an elder, sort of getting mentored by everyone else.
However, you’re right. If all t…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 16 hours ago
Probably. 🤔
Ehh, fine, you can take the rest of them. Just don’t do anything to Sabina or Joseph or Julian. 🤪
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 16 hours ago
Remember?!? I STOLE Joseph. So you can’t kill him!!!!!
I will let you borrow him to finish writing/editing your book if you say you will be NICE to him. Otherwise, he’s my character now.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 6 hours ago
@keilah-h The shading looks awesome! Did you draw that?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 10 hours ago
Lol, I stand corrected. 🤣
But, umm…
then. I mean, Joseph doesn’t last THAT long. (whoops. cat’s out of the bag and running wild. hehehehe)
What does this mean exactly?? 🤨
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 15 hours ago
Probably best not to, yeah. 😅 I’ll be sure to add some emojis next time. 🤪😂
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 15 hours ago
@ellette-giselle Sarcasm does not really work over messaging like this. Especially when people don’t know each other in real life. But probably better to check just in case we end up with another misunderstanding like the other day. 😜
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 15 hours ago
No, I’m just teasing you. XD.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 15 hours ago
Okay, then yes, that’s makes sense.
LOL. Okay, I’m sorry for interrupting your story. I’ll just sit here quietly and wait for the next segment. 😂
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 16 hours ago
What do you mean by splitting the sections into two parts?
I think it’s fine as long as you don’t end the last scene abruptly and put like a marker, like “six years later…”I don’t know, just with Joseph feeling called to go off alone to a different city where basically no one is a Christian… I understand it is a missionary st…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 days, 16 hours ago
WOAH. Time jump. But I love the new side plot. Although, Joseph is basically becoming Aaron now, like Linus has mentioned. I wonder how you could change his circumstances to make it feel completely different from Aaron. But anyway, great job! 👏 I’ll listen to the song later and let you know what I think.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 days, 18 hours ago
@esther-c @highscribeofaetherium
Yeah, I’ve noticed things are slowing down. 😔 The best way I can think of picking things up again would be to update the articles, add new material.
Does anyone remember the time they added a page for a new rank of KP writers? Anyone who wrote three of either articles, short stories, or poems? It was there one…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 5 hours ago
I just decided to read that chapter completely out of order. I’ve only read up to chapter 5 besides this, I think, and that was a while ago. XD I can give some feedback about this chapter, as someone who read it without any context whatsoever.
I liked the sense of friendship I got from all the good guys, even if they couldn’t…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 days, 8 hours ago
@theducktator I’m sorry, I tagged you wrong. How did your recital go?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 5 days, 8 hours ago
Praying 🙏 🙏 God is with you and your family, even when it’s hard to see Him or trust. I love these verses from Psalm 16 —
“I will bless the Lord who guides me; even at night my heart instructs me. I know the Lord is always with me. I will not be shaken, for he is right beside me. No wonder my heart is glad, and I rejoice. My body r…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 5 days, 13 hours ago
plus it all depends on where you caught them in their arcs.
I’m planning to use creative liberties because of this, lol. After all, if some of these people turn violent in the game, that’s not accurate to their canon internal values. This is alternate noncanon; the most moral, innocent character might defenestrate their…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 5 days, 13 hours ago
Did you draw all of these?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 5 days, 13 hours ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 5 days, 14 hours ago
Why does it have to be such a specific way?
Magic potato, havoc potato, what potato am I?
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