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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
What do you mean by splitting the sections into two parts?
I think it’s fine as long as you don’t end the last scene abruptly and put like a marker, like “six years later…”I don’t know, just with Joseph feeling called to go off alone to a different city where basically no one is a Christian… I understand it is a missionary st…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
WOAH. Time jump. But I love the new side plot. Although, Joseph is basically becoming Aaron now, like Linus has mentioned. I wonder how you could change his circumstances to make it feel completely different from Aaron. But anyway, great job! 👏 I’ll listen to the song later and let you know what I think.
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@esther-c @highscribeofaetherium
Yeah, I’ve noticed things are slowing down. 😔 The best way I can think of picking things up again would be to update the articles, add new material.
Does anyone remember the time they added a page for a new rank of KP writers? Anyone who wrote three of either articles, short stories, or poems? It was there one…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I just decided to read that chapter completely out of order. I’ve only read up to chapter 5 besides this, I think, and that was a while ago. XD I can give some feedback about this chapter, as someone who read it without any context whatsoever.
I liked the sense of friendship I got from all the good guys, even if they couldn’t…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
@theducktator I’m sorry, I tagged you wrong. How did your recital go?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
Praying 🙏 🙏 God is with you and your family, even when it’s hard to see Him or trust. I love these verses from Psalm 16 —
“I will bless the Lord who guides me; even at night my heart instructs me. I know the Lord is always with me. I will not be shaken, for he is right beside me. No wonder my heart is glad, and I rejoice. My body r…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 9 months ago
plus it all depends on where you caught them in their arcs.
I’m planning to use creative liberties because of this, lol. After all, if some of these people turn violent in the game, that’s not accurate to their canon internal values. This is alternate noncanon; the most moral, innocent character might defenestrate their…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Did you draw all of these?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Why does it have to be such a specific way?
Magic potato, havoc potato, what potato am I?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle I’ll tag you and respond to that post somewhere else!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
@linus-smallprint LOL.
Really?! I didn’t know you wrote dystopian! What’s it about?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay! Which novel are you working on?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
See, if I have your characters, I don’t think you can keep writing away. They’re mine now. Even Adrian. 😁
Just kidding. Keep writing. I need the next sections.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Too late, they’ve been stolen. xD
Lol. It surprisingly let me.
Too bad you didn’t know about this before.
Now you’re too late to save Adrian.
BRAWWWWWHAAAAAH
Hey, the book hasn’t been published yet, right? 😆 There’s still time to change your mind!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper Could you tag me when you post the next sections? I don’t have a character in this but I still enjoyed reading it. 😊
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
lol. just joking.
You better be! 🤨
That’s actually pretty funny. We should revive it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Lol, he does! I missed when the protection squad actually got formed but from the name, he totally does.
(And Julian. And Leon. *glares at you* Please don’t kill off any more of your charries.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
LOL. Okay, good. xD
Oooooff, okay. Gotcha. That’s pretty rough.
It’s okay, I’ll try to puzzle the rest out like a normal reader. Lol.
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