OrangeArmadillo

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, the special attention, and her age. 🤪

@ellette-giselle

Ohhhh, gotcha.

I don’t know. The way you described her. I think I’m just used to picking out love interests immediately.

@ellette-giselle

Lolol. How did Linus know about Amelia already? And you weren’t very subtle. XD

True, but they would have gotten married.

@ellette-giselle

I feel like Joseph and Amelia are going to get married . . . 🤭

@loopylin

I have some random prompts if that helps in tandem with Otherworldly’s advice.

– The villain is one of your protagonists, gone wrong.

– They have a design that completely contrasts the protagonist (if the protagonist is made of round organic shapes and colors, the villain is the opposite). Or maybe they have a similar design.

– Seems…[Read more]

Yay, okay! @keilah-h @theducktator are you guys interested in running into our group? We can either make it peaceful or go for a surprise fight, I’m game for whatever. XD

@theshadow

As if on cue, the walls around them began to rumble, the floor shook, and a loud hiss sounded behind the group.

I’m curious to find out what this is, lol.

@ellette-giselle

I figured you probably knew, but just wanted go make sure. Because otherwise I would start rambling about stuff without defining things, like I normally do. XD

Yeah, I either lump it into personality or give it a category

@ellette-giselle

That’s true, the rewrite was.

The one paragraph where you said something along the lines of, make the enemy rejoice when you’re out of the fight, seemed taken straight from that quote (C.S. Lewis?) I could see modern believers saying something like that, but I don’t think it would be a well-known phrase in this world. Maybe p…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yay!!! A happy part this time!! 🥲

@loopylin

Ooh, have you considered a space circus troupe? If you’re figuring out where to put her, that is. Seems like something one of your main characters (like one of the twins) could run away to in a fit of anger, and have some time to think.

@highscribeofaetherium

I like how you stylized the trees, very cute!

@ellette-giselle

Not exactly sure what you mean by that……..

Psychology is the study of the human mind and its functions, especially those affecting behavior in a given context. (I just pulled that off Oxford Languages. XD)

I like to add psychological stuff to my character charts. It can tell me why the character wants what he wants.

For exa…[Read more]

@loopylin

XD I should have known.

I’m quite disturbed because we like the same things so often. It seems like our personalities are different enough, though.

He’s the only writing channel I’m subscribed to. He’s simultaneously hilarious and extremely helpful. I love it.

Yep. I used to learn a lot from Abbie Emmons. She was helpful when I was first…[Read more]

@esther-c

Praying! 🙏😢

@ellette-giselle

I have not. Thanks for reminding me about it, lol.

@ellette-giselle

Nope! You just told me I could only put a few of them in my signature, plus the 100 character limit, and that was when I was trying to convince you to save Eric. I can try to fit them all in, or I’ll just write “all of Ellette’s charries” if that’s what you prefer. 🤗😉

@ellette-giselle Looks good!

@ellette-giselle

Hey, he can’t hear me. 🤭

Okay, cool. Looking forward to the next section!

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha. Yeah, no problem. He did faint, so there obviously was enough blood lost for that. You’re good! So, does this mean you’ll have to rewrite a lot of what you already have, or not much since you’re about to have Joseph leave?

@ellette-giselle

Overall, it was pretty good. Some of the dialogue towards the end felt a tiny bit clunky, though.

Very well,”” Eric sighed. “I shall bare the displays of emotion for tonight, but by tomorrow hugs will be limited to once a month.”

This is funny, but it sounds old-fashioned all of a sudden. Is Eric just teasing? Does he lapse i…[Read more]

@rae @raxforge I was kind of shipping you guys in my head already, but I didn’t want to say anything in case it was completely wrong. That’s cute though. 🥲💕