@nova21
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin You can totally join!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Were the characters believable?
I think they were!
Did they have good, individual personalities, or were they clones?
Seemed pretty individual to me.
What would you say was the message of the story?
What would you say my world view was?
Hmmmm…. I’m terrible with deducing messages and intentions, so I can’t really tell, but that’s my fault, not…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle yeah I saw them! Answering them in a sec!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
she probably thinks he’s really boring haha
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Crosshair
“Let’s go questing!!” Ayla brandished her sword out in front of her as she walked.
Crosshair rolled his eyes. Tech or Omega or even Feather probably would’ve enjoyed this more, but none of them were here.
“Stop being so obvious.” he hissed. “If there are in fact guards or dragons or whatever, you yelling and waving that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
XD and I love wearing only dresses and skirts.
To each their own then! I have no problem with that lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
question: what do you think of the Seven year jump forward ending?
Hmm, I don’t mind it. It’s a little strange if your second book is going to pick up right where this one left off, but that’s not a bad thing.
were you sad Aaron died?
Yes, but oddly enough, when a God-fearing character dies in a story, I’m not usually as sad as I…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@esther-c Bruhhh that’s so random
but it’s cool!
I’ve been to Italy and it’s amazing.
The north and the south regions of the country basically consider themselves two different cultures, haha. I’ve only been to the south. The people there were generally nice.
I’ll have to ask my mom about this, she remembers more than me haha
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@theducktator ok thanks!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@theducktator ahhh forgot!!
where were we?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@koshka yeah she’s crazy lol
and yeah I don’t like crossdressing either, if by crossdressing you mean guys in skirts or girls in tuxes or something like that. Eeeyagh, just thinking about what that’d look like is making me cringe.
I mean, I hate wearing dresses or skirts and would rather have a (modest) pair of pants, but I’m sure that’s not…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed very good points!
also yeah braces stink from what I’ve heard. I’m glad I got the plastic things instead of the metal wires, but I know a lot of people who need braces can’t get those cause they only work for certain conditions. And I still had to get a few little metal anchors in my mouth for rubber bands to attach to, and…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed oooh I loved his character in the book! I’ll be participating in this one!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@theshadow same.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Once most girls start to fight, they don’t care what it takes to win.
Hah, you just described my charrie Huntress. Good thing too. I was worried I’d made her a little too masculine when fighting, but now I see I don’t have to completely trash those scenes, just edit them a bit.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper CHARRIE TEAMS YESSSSSSS
The Guardians of the Galaxy. The Bad Batch (technically they’re a ragtag group of misfits if you really think about it). Team Fortress (I won’t talk about them much here, but it doesn’t change the fact that they completely fit the description). The Dragonets of Destiny from Wings of Fire (again, won’t talk…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
yeah, I’m agreeing with @esther-c on this one.
it’s ok to mess around with the “societal norms” as long as you’re not messing with the Biblical roles. That second one’s kinda the whole problem with people these days who believe they can switch between the two (or that there’s a myriad of genders rather than simply two predesigned ones). That’s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I love how that soldier–Adrian, I think?–wants to learn more about Aaron’s beliefs after he saw how brave he was before dying.
The fact that you have a story where the main character dies and the POV switches is nice for me too, because I have a story idea where something like that happens and now I have an idea of what to do.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@theshadow Right now it’s going terribly lol, but at least it’s kinda going….
also, would you mind if I gave you a little challenge concerning my writing??
nobody I’ve asked has said yes to this, and I’m sure you won’t either, but you’re one of the like 5 people I have shared this story with so……
@smiley oh cool!! there are graphic novels?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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