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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@valtmy I do like it when I’m on vacation and I get up early. (weird. People usually go on vacation to sleep in late.) I do feel like I get more done in the day, and I feel healthier. However, that might just be “I’m out of the house” excitement, because when I’m at home, if I get up early I feel extremely tired all afternoon, even if I tak…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@valtmy I hope not! 😛 It was because we wanted to play soccer for twenty minutes or so before my dad had to leave for work. It’s easier to be sure everyone will be home early in the morning, so we played at around 7:20 a.m., which meant I had to wake up at about 7:00. Not really early, I know… 😛
I usually wake up around 9:00. At lea…[Read more]
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Catwing posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
Sorry this is taking me so long to edit through this but I think I have editing figured out now. Cutting down the POVs to just Alex, Chase, and Cele. Finally letting go of the VR beginning that I was stubbornly clinging to. If you realised something about the whole VR please tell me cuz in my mind it only foreshadows book two and I don’t want to…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@valtmy Okay, I’ll be on for a bit. I think. I’m actually really sleepy right now, (shocker, 😛 ) because I got up early this morning.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, oh! I’ll read the rest of part 3 right now, and then I can finish it! Except, I was working on a short story…
…oh well, I can’t believe I haven’t finished yours yet, so I’ll do that now. 🙂
Maybe I’ll be finished by the time you get to the library. See you later!
@valtmy Hey! Let me know when you get on.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Halloo! What are you working on?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice I’m home now. You around?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice I’m listening to Les Miserables and actually liking it! 😀 It really reminds me of Sight&Sound.
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Joy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 2 months ago
@ingridrd I love all five of those!! (the four siblings and Nicole’s character)
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 2 months ago
Here’s some characters I wanted to share with you guys…my sister and I started their story a while back and I brought out the notebook recently. Hence the sketches! 🙂
They are four siblings:
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 2 months ago
Here she is, @nicolerivers03!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@catwing No, I’m not. 🙁 I don’t think we’re going to any more homeschool conferences this year. Hopefully next year, though!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, I’ve never seen The King and I, but I didn’t really like the synopsis. I like a few of the songs okay, but not a lot. I hope you do get a chance to watch Carousel, though!
Okay, see you tomorrow, I hope!
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Yes what you said made sense. 🙂
@rochellaine are you going to the South East Homeschool Expo next weekend? Just wondering because I’m going and then I may see you in real life again. ;P
Unfortunately I am not writing right now as I have to go somewhere.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 2 months ago
@nicolerivers03 Hey! I’ll draw her—she sounds like a ton of fun! I’ll get her done within the next few days. 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice It was actually “Bring Him Home,” and I liked the Dream Cast version of it a bit better, but still not a lot. I have a hard time enjoying anything where the singer uses wide vibrato. For some reason that sound really annoys me. The Dream Cast version was definitely much better, though it still had the awful wide vibrato in parts of…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Ok, yeah, I could tell that I might like the song if Hugh Jackman hadn’t sung it that way. Let me give it a listen…
How’s your editing going?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia Yes, that’s what I meant. Though I guess it could also stand for Rodgers and Hart, who wrote some very good musicals together too, so sorry for not clarifying. 😛 My favorite musical composer is actually Jerome Kern, but I thought you’d probably recognize Rodgers and Hammerstein better. Did you like Cinderella? Have you heard the Jul…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia Have you listened to any of the old R&H musicals? You like old stuff, right? (I’m forever lamenting that @seekjustice doesn’t. 😉 )
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia 😛 How touching.
@seekjustice Haha, I got your tag, and that’s why I’m here. (Other than the fact that I just got home from a family activity and would have gotten on to check anyhow because I do that every day around 4:00 and 5:00 because that’s when you wake up…yeah, other than that. 😉 )
Have you listened to anything else from that…[Read more]
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I’m glad to help! So, due to some problems on my end of the line, I can no longer edit the Google Doc. Well, I can sometimes, but the weird thing is, some days my computer can connect, some days it just won’t. I can still read it, and offer some general critiques, but I can’t comment. Is that ok?
For general stuff it might be easier to post it on the thread I created (I shall dig that up), but I replied to some of your comments so for that and pointing out exactly where things are you could comment on the doc.
I have it anyone with a link can comment, if you can’t comment you can request access. If you can’t do that I can change the link…[Read more]
@daughteroftheking you can contact me through my blog and I can give you access.
Send me a imaginary pigeon ;3
Sorry I’m late! (again!) I still have access, the problem is just my own computer being inconsistent. I can still comment most of the time, but I wanted to warn you that Google Docs and I are not the best of friends right now. 😛 I’m going to put beta reading as part of my school schedule (yay for homeschooling), so hopefully I can be more…[Read more]
I see. If it keeps happening you can email me and I’ll add you directly.
Yay homeschooling!
It’s been a month so I started my next draft. But it’s coming very slowly… I may editing it on the draft you have access to. Chapter one nearly done. So you can try and get me to work faster. 😉
Thanks! It tis a grand song.