Not-So-Secret Secret Assassin

@loopylin

1. Thank you Madam Lin the Loopy-Minded, I shall always welcome your feedback.

2. Very good. Take the time you need.

3. Good. >:)

@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon

I’ll throw him in with the boys after I sort things out, read up to this point. I’m leaving for the doctor’s and my mind is occupied with needles.

@jonas It worked!

@ellette-giselle I’m just reading them now.

@ellette-giselle I was gonna sign in to comment and not just be a guest user, but turns out this computer would probably send the comments to my mom instead of me, which is probably a bad idea lol

@grcr @savannah_grace2009 awesome plot ideas lol

@koshka

*Does a little dance* Descriptions are sometimes the bane of my existence because you never know if they’re coming across.

And I promise bullying isn’t the majority of Lucille’s childhood experience. There are actually so many things I want to write about for her, and many things are more cheerful and interesting.

@elishavet-pidyon

She’s my favorite, may I have mercy on her soul. XD

I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?

Yes, he’s Dali. I call Lucille’s mum by her name as well. It feels more humanizing to call him that in this story rather than calling him ‘her dad’ or Dad.

I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it…

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@whalekeeper

*Gasp*

Wow. I like Lucille Barnes. The whole scene was beautiful to read, although I’d like to slap a few kids silly. The descriptions were clear and lovely.

Poor Lucille.

@ellette-giselle

:] Mayhaps I will post more when desire returns.

@loopylin

Is Enid your friend?

“Yeah, she’s… yeah.”

No, I’ve never been on one of those. We have cars and, like, normal buses.

“Huh. At first I was going to say that sounds tedious, but I can’t talk like that when sky trams are so undependable.”

What do the buildings in your city look like?

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I hesitated for like ten minutes before pushing the submit button. I don’t know how some of you guys do this regularly. :’-)

@loopylin @rae @koshka @ellette-giselle @theducktator

Yaay, I actually have a self-contained snippet to share. This is pre-teen Barnes, in case you’re not sure who she is.

The typewriter clicked to a stop, its keys fluttering up and down like the legs of an overturned insect. Lucille opened her eyes. The sun glared through her eyelashes, turning…

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@loopylin

and now I’m really sad but also weirdly motivated to get some writing done.

Be sad then!! *Shakes you to make you write more* I need a Lois x Fel scene as soon as you can deliver.

I made a matching mask and cape, and the cape is amazingly red and flowy. I should wear it more but I need to fix the collar.

@loopylin

Thanks! You really should if you want to.

@ellette-giselle

😁 She’s my favorite character.

@jonas

Awesome, it worked!

@loopylin

Oh gracious. I want to read both of these so much. XD

Maybe the ink one. Maybe. But then, the cat…

Which are you most excited about?

Oh. I want to be writing short stories consistently. Those I might give to people for feedback. Hopefully that’s not too confusing.

@jonas

I don’t think the link is working for me.
Just to be clear, because my submission form might be confusing. I just want to be kept accountable for getting a couple chapters done every week. I won’t be sharing them. But I might ask for brainstorming help now and then, and I like helping other people if they need it.