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Keilah H. replied to the topic Summarize your story in one weird sentence! in the forum Topic of the Week 10 months, 4 weeks ago
@grcr @savannah_grace2009 awesome plot ideas lol
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
*Does a little dance* Descriptions are sometimes the bane of my existence because you never know if they’re coming across.
And I promise bullying isn’t the majority of Lucille’s childhood experience. There are actually so many things I want to write about for her, and many things are more cheerful and interesting.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
She’s my favorite, may I have mercy on her soul. XD
I think I like her dad. Is he Dali?
Yes, he’s Dali. I call Lucille’s mum by her name as well. It feels more humanizing to call him that in this story rather than calling him ‘her dad’ or Dad.
I also found her description of her hair fascinating. Is it just metaphor, or does it…
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
*Gasp*
Wow. I like Lucille Barnes. The whole scene was beautiful to read, although I’d like to slap a few kids silly. The descriptions were clear and lovely.
Poor Lucille.
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
:] Mayhaps I will post more when desire returns.
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 11 months ago
Is Enid your friend?
“Yeah, she’s… yeah.”
No, I’ve never been on one of those. We have cars and, like, normal buses.
“Huh. At first I was going to say that sounds tedious, but I can’t talk like that when sky trams are so undependable.”
What do the buildings in your city look like?
“Imagine every building had three or four stories at l…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I hesitated for like ten minutes before pushing the submit button. I don’t know how some of you guys do this regularly. :’-)
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@loopylin @rae @koshka @ellette-giselle @theducktator
Yaay, I actually have a self-contained snippet to share. This is pre-teen Barnes, in case you’re not sure who she is.
The typewriter clicked to a stop, its keys fluttering up and down like the legs of an overturned insect. Lucille opened her eyes. The sun glared through her eyelashes, turning…
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
and now I’m really sad but also weirdly motivated to get some writing done.
Be sad then!! *Shakes you to make you write more* I need a Lois x Fel scene as soon as you can deliver.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months ago
I made a matching mask and cape, and the cape is amazingly red and flowy. I should wear it more but I need to fix the collar.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months ago
Thanks! You really should if you want to.
😁 She’s my favorite character.
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whaley replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Awesome, it worked!
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Koshka replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Oh gracious. I want to read both of these so much. XD
Maybe the ink one. Maybe. But then, the cat…
Which are you most excited about?
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whaley replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Oh. I want to be writing short stories consistently. Those I might give to people for feedback. Hopefully that’s not too confusing.
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whaley replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
I don’t think the link is working for me.
Just to be clear, because my submission form might be confusing. I just want to be kept accountable for getting a couple chapters done every week. I won’t be sharing them. But I might ask for brainstorming help now and then, and I like helping other people if they need it. -
whaley replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
Which one have you been getting more ideas for recently?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months ago
@loopylin I love those unfiltered thoughts lollll
As for the lava thing: I doubt it, the lava is too hot to have any water in it. If a person were able to withstand the heat and touch it, I think it’d feel more like liquidy metal or a smooth rock.
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Koshka replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Seriously got an attitude that might cover some seriousness.
Ohh, have fun!
I’ll probably not get to the chapters till Sunday, as today is a “clean half the campus” day between camps.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months ago
@whalekeeper you should!!
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months ago
Thanks!! Those kinds of doodles only take me ten minutes. I should make more of them.
The game showcase tonight sadly didn’t have Silksong. But they teased it a few times, which was funny. XD
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