NatalieMarie

@Daeus yeah, I don’t think length is too big of a deal.

@epicaddie2 @salome01w4g Signing off. Only wrote 374, but, you know. Slow and steady is better than nothing and steady.

@kate-flournoy Possibly. I mean, certainly, but I don’t know if the other options will sound good. “The unready time traveler” doesn’t strike me as very good. 😉

Anyway, I don’t think length is a very big problem. I’ll think through alternatives though.

What do the rest of you think of this title? @hope @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @graciegirl @d…[Read more]

@Daeus ooooooohhhhhh… ooh wow. Mm. Yes. I like. The only problem I have with that one is it does seem a little long. Any way around that, do you think?

@eipcaddie2 @daughteroftheking Er, actually, I have to do something for about five minutes first

@epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking I’m back. And now I’m aiming to write till 9.

@epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking And yet again I have to go. 🙁 I shall return though!

@epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking Okay! I’m back. I shall now be writing till 8:30.

@kate-flournoy The Time Traveler Who Wasn’t Ready actually ties in with the almost last line.

“Art ready, sir?”
“Do I need to be?”

Time is a Harsh Master/Taskmaster sounds too much like a nonfiction self-help book. 😛

See, INFPs may not be natural leaders… but we wield the power of veto like a boss. *echoing evil laughter*

@eppicaddie2 @daughteroftheking Ooops! I have to go. I’ll be back though.

@Daeus I like both Time Turns Again (*small feelz attack* IT TIES WITH THE LAST LINE YOU SEE) and The Time Traveler Who Wasn’t Ready. The others… not so much. They just don’t fit the action feel of the story. Philosophy is all well and good (obviously, knowing me 😛 ) but the primary focus of this story, I’d say, is on the action/adventure. The…[Read more]

@epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking I’m writing till 8.

@kate-flournoy

“The Time Traveler Who Wasn’t Ready”

And an alternative would be “Time is a taskmaster”

@dragon-snapper I like the third one too.

I also thought I should change the second one to just: “The second time travel”

Or this:

“Time is a harsh master”

Or this:

“The first and second time travel”

@kate-flournoy Okay. How about this one?

“Time Turns Again”

@Daeus ehh… not quite. It sounds like one of those really old, stuffy devotional books written for children in the Victorian era.

*kicks legs and scowls at her screen* I should really think of something helpful.