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    Kate Flournoy
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      @Daeus oooh, that’s more like it. I don’t think that one necessarily (because it gives away the ending) but that’s definitely a whole lot more dynamic and deep.

      Anonymous
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        @daeus That definitely sounds intriguing.

        #43899
        Snapper
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          @daeus Ooh, I like that…although it is a little long. Of course, the title ‘The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe’ is long too. XD Maybe instead of ‘who’ you could say ‘that’….I don’t know…weird Snapper preferences.

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          #43903
          Daeus
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            @dragon-snapper Yes, I like it too. Unfortunately, I find there’s a movie under that title and two novels. None of them seem popular at all, especially not the novels, but it would still be annoying if they showed up when someone searched for my book. I’m still keeping it in mind because if someone sees the title and goes “ooh”, that’s the most important thing, but I’d rather not have a title that already exists.

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            #43926
            Gracie
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              @Daeus So far I agree with the general crowd. Those first three, eh…..not really feeling it.

              However, The Man Who Came Back….

              I hear an echo of that geeky squeal I give when something in a story is totally awesome.

              (In comprehensible English: what Kate said. That’s more like it. I don’t think that one necessarily though.) 😛

              *is probably geeking out about something*

              #43927
              Emma Flournoy
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                @Daeus Oh right, To Soar ON Eagles. It didn’t give me any Native American vibes till Kate mentioned it (thanks a lot Kate. XD) but I don’t think it’s the best one anyway. Yet.

                #43932
                Catwing
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                  @emma-flournoy @kate-flournoy Time-travel symbols? Let’s see… A watch, gears, swirly portals, a glowing book, a clock face, distorted picture, etc… @daeus That helpful?

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                  #43933
                  Emma Flournoy
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                    @Catwing It would be if those were in his book… 😛 His time-travel element isn’t like that though…

                    #43942
                    Daeus
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                      @graciegirl *sigh* I know. I’m so close.


                      @catwing
                      Those are great symbols for a time travel cover, however, they don’t insert very naturally into a title. Except maybe gears.

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                      #43946
                      Catwing
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                        @daeus *shrugs* Oh, well.

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                        #44102
                        Kate Flournoy
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                          @DAEUS. What about that beyond-cool password the Watchers had amongst themselves? The gears of the world turn faster. Anything there?

                          Daeus
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                            @kate-flournoy Hmm. That might almost make one itself, actually. I’ll think about it some more. Thanks. 🙂

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                            Anonymous
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                              @daeus – the man who came back is definitely much better . . .

                              #44152
                              Daeus
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                                After racking my brain, I managed to come up with another one.

                                “The battle of yesteryear”

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                                #44166
                                Kate Flournoy
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                                  @Daeus ehh… not quite. It sounds like one of those really old, stuffy devotional books written for children in the Victorian era.

                                  *kicks legs and scowls at her screen* I should really think of something helpful.

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