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    Daeus
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      @kate-flournoy Okay. How about this one?

      “Time Turns Again”

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      Daeus
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        Or this:

        “The first and second time travel”

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        Daeus
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          Or this:

          “Time is a harsh master”

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          Snapper
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            Well, with the first one, Time Turns Again, it seems pretty cool, but I like the third one, Time is a Harsh Master…although, I think it might work better as ‘Harsh Master’ instead….*shrugs* Titles.

            When you sent me the document you said, “Hi D.G., welcome to my book.” Maybe you should call it ‘My Book’? XD

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            #44171
            Snapper
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              Tagses!


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              See above.

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              #44172
              Daeus
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                @dragon-snapper I like the third one too.

                I also thought I should change the second one to just: “The second time travel”

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                Snapper
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                  @daeus There’s also, “Who He Was.” Not sure why I thought of that….it could apply to either the MC or the Villain. *more shrugs*

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                  Daeus
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                    And an alternative would be “Time is a taskmaster”

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                    Daeus
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                      @kate-flournoy

                      “The Time Traveler Who Wasn’t Ready”

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                      Kate Flournoy
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                        @Daeus I like both Time Turns Again (*small feelz attack* IT TIES WITH THE LAST LINE YOU SEE) and The Time Traveler Who Wasn’t Ready. The others… not so much. They just don’t fit the action feel of the story. Philosophy is all well and good (obviously, knowing me 😛 ) but the primary focus of this story, I’d say, is on the action/adventure. The title should reflect that.

                        … The Time Traveler Who Wasn’t Ready is really starting to grow on me though.

                        Kate Flournoy
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                          Time is a Harsh Master/Taskmaster sounds too much like a nonfiction self-help book. 😛

                          See, INFPs may not be natural leaders… but we wield the power of veto like a boss. *echoing evil laughter*

                          Daeus
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                            @kate-flournoy The Time Traveler Who Wasn’t Ready actually ties in with the almost last line.

                            “Art ready, sir?”
                            “Do I need to be?”

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                            Kate Flournoy
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                              @Daeus ooooooohhhhhh… ooh wow. Mm. Yes. I like. The only problem I have with that one is it does seem a little long. Any way around that, do you think?

                              Daeus
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                                @kate-flournoy Possibly. I mean, certainly, but I don’t know if the other options will sound good. “The unready time traveler” doesn’t strike me as very good. 😉

                                Anyway, I don’t think length is a very big problem. I’ll think through alternatives though.

                                What do the rest of you think of this title? @hope @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @graciegirl @dragon-snapper @northerner @josiahdeboer @emily @catwing @anyone-else

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                                Kate Flournoy
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                                  @Daeus yeah, I don’t think length is too big of a deal.

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