Natalie C.

@theshadow

It is on the planet Earth.

Emmerich learned from last time i see lol

Huntress

This pair looked like humans too.

I elbowed Sniper. “Looks like you’re the only one of your kind around here.”

He muttered a growl but didn’t say anything intelligible.

Emmerich introduced himself to the couple, whose names were Trevor and…[Read more]

@loopylin @rae @whalekeeper

Sniper

“Crocodile man,” the kid said, lookin’ up at me wondrously.

This was confusin’.

I flicked my tail and looked back at it, a bit sheepish. “What?”

Huntress and Soldier snickered at me. I gave them an annoyed look.

his brain has stopped working lol

@theshadow

Sniper

Huntress easily blazed a path for us, trackin’ the creature. I would’ve done the same, but I instead kept an eye out for any others that would wanna eat us.

Several times I sensed somethin’ nearby, but I couldn’t tell whether it was a talkin’ sentient creature or not.

Eventually we reached a cave.

“Its trail leads in there.”…[Read more]

@whalekeeper lol ok

@loopylin

hehe he’s so Australian. I love how I can hear the accent in his dialogue.

yesssss I know that’s why I love writing him hehe

(reminds me of another Australian crocodile…)

ooooh who?

also @loopy and @whalekeeper should I wait for @rae to get back into this or should I just continue writing?

@loopylin

Huntress

Soldier plummeted. So did the other bird, which was basically a gigantic crow.

Luckily the crow spread his wings at the right time and slowed his fall enough to land in a giant hedge.

Sniper and I ran over to try and help, but Lucy and the other girl figured it out themselves. Their mount hopped away with a piece of string…[Read more]

@loopylin sure.

@loopylin that’s fine lol

we can just say they breezed past him without caring or something

still keeping the crow catching his feathers though, that was funny

@theshadow

Huntress

“Do either of you two have anything that could slow the creature down?”

“We’ve got our guns and our knives,” I said, holding up my weapons. “If we wanna kill the creature, or at least injure it, then we’ll definitely use them on it. If we don’t, we could set up some kind of trap for it. Judging by its size and how it moves,…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @rae @loopylin

Soldier (haven’t written anything from his pov in a while so we’ll see how this goes)

We’d been wandering for a LONG time. Way too long!

After waking up and crossing the lake we’d found ourselves in a maze of hedges. Very boxed in. I didn’t like it! I was supposed to be FREE!

Something swooped far overhead. A crow!…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12 yooooooo hiiiiiiiii

congratulations on the book!!! Like elishavet said if you need an alpha reader i’ll be there!

@theshadow hellooooooo

@elishavet-pidyon HAHA lollll

On other news, Tolkien keeps stealing my character names.

real

although I steal names from everyone else so……

@theshadow

Sniper

The creature moved much faster than we’d initially seen it move and swiped our weapons outta our hands with its front claws. Then it grabbed Rosalind and charged off with her.

Emmerich ran to chase it. I held him back. “Wait,” I growled. “You saw how fast that thing ran when he decided to attack us. You’ll never catch up with…[Read more]

@theshadow

Huntress

“There is a creature,” Rosalind pointed to something lumbering through the trees.

“What is that?” I asked as it got closer. It was huge, and pale-colored, with long legs. It moved fairly slow, so it didn’t seem predatory….yet.

Sniper’s tail lashed and his talons tensed in anticipation, either of a fight or of a ter…[Read more]

sorry for taking 3 days to do anything lol

@theshadow bruh it takes me so long to replyyyy

Sniper

“That is impossible. You have never even heard of Earth? Where do you come from?”

“She’s from Lygon. Born on one of its moons.” I nodded to Huntress.  “And I’m from Staten.”

They still didn’t seem to understand what that meant.

I lashed my tail. “Never mind. If I ‘ad to guess, you’…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon Kinda in between? Like, the planet that it came from uses it for their naming system so they understand a lot of it, at least what was written down, but besides that most of the other worlds just think of the words as weird names.

not sure if that makes sense but ehhh

@elishavet-pidyon I have one conlang, but it’s not an advanced language, just the remains of a long-extinct one. The characters use it as a naming system–two-syllable names consisting of the two one-syllable words in the old language that best describe the person.

@theshadow

Huntress

“Humans and animals are the only creatures we know of on our planet, aside from the spiritual creatures of our world.” Emmerich explained, after a garbled attempt to pronounce “Ornithiform” (giving up after two tries).

I decided not to ask what the spiritual creatures of their world were like. If they were anything like ours…[Read more]