MNValentine

@jenwriter17 (And everyone else on here obviously) COME OVER TO CALIFORNIA OVER SUMMER!!!!!! PLEASE! I need to meet Kapeefers!

I mean, I might be in D.C. next summer, but it’s not for certain yet so don’t plan on it.

@filewriterbase13x  *appears from realm of the hiatus*

HiFileWriterIloveyourstorysofarcanIbeinittooit’sokayifit’stoolatethankyou!

*disappears again*

@skredder @ariel-ashira @rochellaine

Thanks! 😀

Hey guys I have a prayer request. I have a project at school as well as upcoming exams that I am struggling with. So if any of you can pray for me I’ll really appreciate it. Thanks!

@rochellaine

OK I’ve requested access! 🙂

@dekreel

I think the others have already given some very good responses so these are just my two cents:

#1: Think of other reasons for your bully to torment people apart from the cliche weakness, jealous or insecurity. For example, some usually nice people that I know unintentionally become bullies when a new person intrudes on the comfortable…[Read more]

@ingridrd

I’m praying for you!

@alia

Oh dear, sounds rough. I’m praying for your friend.

@rochellaine

Just read your post about the adoption. Will pray for your family and the kids too! Hope it goes well and gets settled soon.

@ariel-ashira

Aww… These poems are so fun and cute.

@gh24682468999

My rule of thumb is that main characters should be both bright and deep. “Bright” as in they have some qualities that you (and hopefully your readers) find interesting (note: this is not the same as likable or attractive). “Deep” means that these traits come from a source (the characters’ past or background) that should at least be…[Read more]

@kaya-young

Yep that was the plan. That’s why I introduced plot points such as the other members of the imperial family, the history of the empire, the assassin etc. because they will be relevant to the ‘adventure’ part of things.

But not everything was linking up and making sense. That’s why I have been stuck on this story for a long time and I…[Read more]

@kaya-young

@rochellaine

Glad you liked it!

My original idea was a sort of Man vs God thing. It draws upon the belief that our lives are ruled by “Fate” that was prevalent in ancient China.

Basically the setting is a story world where “Fate” appears to cause lots of silly love stories to happen and the “Rules” are basically just all the…[Read more]

@mnvalentine

Hmm… yes maybe that will work. I was planning on having a more sweeping epic but maybe a tighter story might suit the premise better. Thanks!

@introvert_girl

Sure no problem.

@skye

Welcome fellow INTJ to the bestistest place on the internet! Hope you enjoy yourself here! 😀

So what are your favourite books?

@rochellaine

Yeah I think I might do that. Thanks!

@mnvalentine

I agree with what everyone else has said. I think the problem has to do with the pacing and the passiveness of the main character. There is a lot of description that slow the story down and much of the information conveyed through dialogue could have easily been summed up in a few lines.

Just some thoughts…

#1: The article in the…[Read more]

@daeus

I might consider that. Thanks!

@rochellaine

Haha I know you guys are all really nice. The problem is that people outside the KP forums can access it as well and I’m shy about my writing. 😳

@that_writer_girl_99

Hmm… I did think about using that feature but I know not everyone may want to give out their email so I wanted to check if…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking

Yep. I guess I will just have to get over myself if I can’t think of another way. 😅

Thanks!