@mkfairygirl
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Paxton
Paxton’s smile faltered. He shuffled, toeing at the marble floor of the hall.
For a moment…he’d forgotten the fact that he’d have to go back home at the end of the school day…
He wouldn’t get to room with his friends anymore…or stay in a dorm…
“Oh, hey…you alright? Did…did I say something wrong?”
Paxton force…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Love that my baby is coming out of his shell 😭 but he’s still so insecure and scared gaaaah
He just needs his friends to keep helping him… -
GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Paxton
Paxton’s heart leapt suddenly as a boy only a few inches taller than him bumped his shoulders. The boy turned, eyes wide with apology before recognition crossed his expression.
“Oh…Paxton, right? What’s up?” Paxton blinked, trying to place the boy.
His mind whirred until the face finally snapped into memory, though the memor…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Ik they’re busy… but honestly can’t wait till marvel and pax are reunited 😭 their friendship was so cuuute
especially cuz Marcel kinda strikes me as the kind to always be that “younger brother” but with pax he kinda got to be the older brother friend
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
OK OK I AM HEEERE @esther-c XD yea he’s trying to get his bearings torn by these newfound feelings of “makeshift freedom” even though he’s still technically trapped, it’s more freedom then he’s ever had before and he’s unsure of how to handle it, and still kinda freaked.
Plus home life still royally stinks…. So yea
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Goodbye freedom…
that’s…all I can bring myself to say rn…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@esther-c yesss I echo that
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@beth-torres Oh, he’s gonna be startled when she talks and he understands her.
Snake
A human was approaching. He kept down his still-existing urge to strike at the smaller creature, remembering Chief’s words.
“They’re just small, wingless copies of us–not worth eating, and besides, who in their right mind eats a sentient creature?” he’d told…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
@loopylin cool
I love hearing worldbuilding ideas lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic I'M BACK BABY!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 I’m glad you’re back!!
I’m also glad Pax will be back in the roleplays. He’s awesome.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins oh btw I know you won’t see this till Sunday, but my dad pointed out something interesting about the tetrachromacy thing we talked about.
He said from a tactical/militaristic point of view, it would be a good advantage for Leo and Crosshair, as snipers, to have better color vision. Think of Cross trying to take out an enemy…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 7 months ago
@loopylin I like those! His clawed feet are cool btw.
I’m assuming all the clothes his species makes are fireproof.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins all righty! See you then I guess!!
(and now you know why I have Tech as my profile pic lol. Like him, I can fill your head with useless info for hours)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
And this condition does stem from genetic mutations, possibly the same ones that cause color blindness. I have a theory that the Bad Batch’s mutations would have either killed them or done nothing but make them weird-looking if the Kaminoans hadn’t tweaked their genes to remove the lethal ones and enhance the ones that would help them. Remember,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins Maybe! I’ve never thought of that, but there are studies on some people (the only ones with the trait are female, but a male could probably be introduced through genetic experimentation, which is exactly what happened) who had extra light-sensing cells in their eyes. It’s called tetrachromacy, and it’s though that those with the…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I’d suggest keep her age and change his. It makes things easier.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
I put wayyyyy too much thought into this lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
@evelyn-collins All right!
So, Leo’s arc here–the story we’re trying to tell with her–seems that she doesn’t trust anyone, and is really aloof. Her mom’s hurt her, Varian’s not the nicest either, and she’s heard about how her dad walked out on her. Is there somewhere you’re going with that? Like, she’s going to have to trust Crosshair that…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 7 months ago
ok so wanna hear some more stuff I have ideas for?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@freedowmriter76 if u ever come back, will you show us how far your fanfics have got?
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