MineralizedWritings

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin

Yeah, That sounds good! These six will be together! 😊 Yes, a very shaken Matthew 😂.

I’ll RP in the morning. I gotta got to bed. Talk to you in the morning!! 😊

@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness

I don’t want Carter, Matthew, Layla, and Carmen to split up, so I think I’ll join that group. That leaves five characters in the other group I think, including my dragon. Is that ok?

@mineralizedwritings

I like the name Elena’s name!

Thanks! It’s the Spanish version of Helen, which is interesting.

@mineralizedwritings

Your revised plot sounds great! I like Afterthoughts the best, I think.

Sometimes it’s hard to change things in your plot/story (that’s why my first book still sounds like a nine-year-old’s writings lol) So good for you for sticking with it! 😊

@mineralizedwritings

woah!! That was amazing! I would love to read the entire book when or if you publish! I’m hooked 😊.

That’s great!! I mean, it sounds violent, but I’m glad you’re hooked! 😀

So many of your people descriptions are just on point! I never would have used, “sniffed defiantly at the world” but I understand exactly what he did and t…

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@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

this isn’t really from any particular person’s pov, so…

“Who are you!?” Lyla shouted.

The creature shifted its position outside the window, revealing pale gold scales. It huffed, momentarily fogging up the glass.

“Quite a lot of fire for such a little girl,” the…[Read more]

@esther-c @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

Matthew

“I’m Lesli.” Tauren’s…girl friend? said, reaching out her hand towards the Lyla.“I see we both have nervous little brother problems?”

Oh no!! Is-is- she going to make fun of me?

Of COURSE she will!! I told myself, who wouldn’t? You can barely say hi to someone new witho…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Can’t wait to see your revised version! I think I like the title Afterthoughts the best

@mineralizedwritings

*twirls around singing “Tauren Forever!”*

@mineralizedwritings

Of course!! 😁

Thank you so much!!!

@esther-c

Yay!!! I totally will!!

Oh, thank you so much! I know she will appreciate it!!

Yes. Ev is veeeery outgoing! 🤣 And impulsive… and I could go on… and it may end up being an understatement. Lol 🤣

I love my boy. 😁

Lolol!! haha, Yeah! It’s hard not to 😂!

@loopylin

Whoa!!He sounds sca…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Hehe that’s a long story. Here’s the short version: Me and @theloonyone were swimming in a river one time together, and, because our imaginations go a lil crazy when we hang out, we started coming up with a river monster that lived in the river we were swimming in. We picked Johnny as a random guy to be an example of how the…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Good, good! I’m glad you feel that way! I just wanted to see how far you were going with these revisions. Sometimes us writers can be ruthless to ourselves. 🤣

@mineralizedwritings

Ev is so fun to write!

And yes, when I was writing this, i was nervous for Ami too! 😆 I wasn’t quite sure what was going to happen. Lol

@mineralizedwritings

hehe… poor johnny… 😏🤣

Johnny is from a story @loopylin and I started writing like a year ago-ish about a river monster. Johnny is the first victim…

(It’s a bit dark)

We started saying poor Johnny and eventually, our cousins picked it up too. 😂 I’m not sure if they know what it’s from, though

@mineralizedwritings

I agree with @felicity that The Afterthoughts or Afterthoughts is short and sweet. I don’t find it vague at all. But of course, go with whatever sounds best to you 🙂

@mineralizedwritings

Um… I think you might’ve met Grant, not sure though. I’ve written a bit with him now but I’m not sure if I’ve posted any of the chapters with him on KP yet.

and fun fact, my Irl name means Ruler of Elves. My old youth pastor called me Elrondia when he learned that 😂

That’s cool! 😆 He sounds really fun

@felicity

Lyla’s name is so sweet!

Thank you so much!!

@esther-c

I didn’t know you had a Asher as well!! The meaning does not quite fit with my Asher 😅And the meaning of Lyla is sooo pretty!!

Oh, that’s right, Everton’s brother’s name is Asher too!! That’s cool!! I didn’t realize that! Lol, yeah, he seems mysterious. Aww, thank you…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Yay!!! I totally will!!

@theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h

Amidala

Ami instinctively grabbed Ev’s arm and took a few steps back. She stared at the large green eye peeking in through the window.

“Ev… what is that?”

Everton

Ev shakily stood up, and Ami grabbed his arm. She pulled him back a few feet. “Ev… wh…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Ok! May I make announcement?

Of course! Anytime! 😀

Hmm…since I’m a short title kind of girl, I like The Afterthoughts. You could even go for one word if you wanted, Afterthoughts. I think that word is poignant and gives just enough information to get you to want more, like I’d start thinking, “What or who’s the…[Read more]

@godlyfantsy12 @felicity @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6

You asked for it!! XD

Chapter 17

Everton delivered one more punch and moved to the door next to him. He shoved the key in the keyhole and whipped open the door. There stood Amidala. She laughed. “How in the world?”

Ev just smirked. “I’ll tell you later. Come on. We need to…[Read more]