MineralizedWritings

@ellette-giselle

Okay, so you’re going for a more ambiguous setting with more brainwashing? I do love The Giver and Fahrenheit 451, I like the genre.

I feel like most of what you just said doesn’t really have much to do with the story………

…Well I said this:

 Because it doesn’t make much sense from the perspective of a government to deny heterosex…

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@ellette-giselle

*discreetly offers tissues*

@ellette-giselle

Okay great 😊 (If anyone is sensitive please skip reading.)

This is just a big brainstorm post, maybe it will be helpful.

Why would everyone give up as a group on heterosexuality? American culture overwhelmingly enjoys any depiction of male-female pleasure, it is an integral part of our culture. (It’s disgusting, but here we a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle THANK YOU!!

I’m excited to write them more in later books, hehe

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @rae @grcr @esther-c @theducktator @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-lol

Violet Iris resistance group!!

(not all of the characters on this board are shown or even mentioned in Freedom’s Fire…shhh…that’s for later books🫢🤫🤭)

@ellette-giselle

So I like the idea of a marriage themed dystopia, but I do have some questions because some of this doesn’t make sense and could be cleared up. Can I ask a few things?

@keilah-h

Cool, I listened to it while writing.

I’m still tinkering away at this! but casually. And I actually have to write future scenes before posting the next bit because of all the plot threads, deaths, etc etc etc.

Actually I haven’t seen any story use objectification as the protagonist’s flaw, that would be kind of cool. Lots of rough growth, but cool.

@ellette-giselle

Ohh *sneaks in* this is the marriage story right? If you post a section where the characters explain why marriage is banned versus discouraged, I’d like to read it. I liked the first scene you shared too.

Also I had to meme-ify this 😅

But no one’s perfect at the beginning of a book, it’s a good story idea to see someone grow…[Read more]

@grcr You’re welcome! 💜 The uniform looks really good!!

@ellette-giselle You’re welcome! 💜

Man, that drawing makes me tear up when I think about him.

i miss him so much😭😭

@the_lost-journal

wow congrats!

Thank you!💜

Hey sorry I didn’t say more, I replied late and I had to go to bed. 😅 Anyway it’s nice to meet you!

Totally understand! No need to apologize, haha XD It’s nice to meet you too!!

Cool, another homeschooler! I used to be homeschooled but now I’m in high school. (my moms choice)

Ah, I see. Haha, I’ve been…[Read more]

@theducktator GIRLLLLL😂😂🤣😆

You just made my day😭😭

AHHH I LOVE ALL OF THE FREEDOM’S FIRE MEMES!!!!

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THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

Poor Riker😅

@grcr

😍

I love his hair!! The shading and colors are really good and the uniform is so accurate!

@ellette-giselle

🤩🤩

He looks so sweet and gentle. I love the coloring and the small details on his uniform! The expression is so fitting and he looks so good😭😭

@mineralizedwritings

🤩😂

That smile!! XD I love his hair and the side profile,…[Read more]

Okay cool

I just realized several people owe Marcel or want to say sorry for something. I tried to even it out with the demon fight, but I don’t think this is ever going to stop unless he stops doing things for other people. 😂

@loopylin

Hehehehe, repressed romantic emotions.

Lois

Once he turned a corner, Lois let the grin he had been holding in light up his face. He did a little fist pump and began walking faster. Everything in the past couple hours kept replaying in his mind, as he tried to process.

This is actually happening. I can’t believe it. I really owe you, Cloud Boy.

*Eyes glued to the page* FeLoisity has been officially confirmed. Good, good.

WAIT…did Fel just say what I think she did?! SHE DID! I seriously had to give it a second read!!!!

hehe

@beth-torres

Felicity

“Thanks.” Felicity wiggled her toes. “Makes climbing easier.”

Lois stepped forward and lightly touched Felicity’s arm to get her attention.

“I have some studying I need to get done tonight, so I think I’ll head to my dorm now. See you later? Tomorrow morning?”

“‘Course.”

He gave her a small smile, nodded at Maverick,…[Read more]

@rae @theshadow

Okay Shadow, I’m not going to move after this until you’re good to go. 🙂

Barnes

“Good,” she replied to Tenz.

Hugo began to stir. He stretched, and sat up, casually tracing the hearth with the tip of his foot. He reminded Barnes of a stray cat who used to haunt her front porch – grateful for the warmth, but undeniably exploiting…[Read more]

@rae

Good choice.

@theshadow

Awesome, thank you! *Sees the cookie box is already empty* *Refills it with caramel popcorn*

It’s difficult to make this scene clear, because it is confusing from the character’s perspective. He is supposed to not know why this is happening. So… yeah. XD