Milena

@maryg3

Thank you! it took me a year and a half to decide! lol

Well, I must say my inspiration was partly from a Griffin clan keychain pendant I was given two years ago. One side of my family two generations back has that last name. 🙂 That triggered the story being started as well as the story of the MC (main character), but the actual world…[Read more]

@will_starke

sorry, your tag didn’t go through the first time

@nova21

haha!! Great idea!! And I’d say your MCs dialogue fits.

My sci fi book MC is shy in big groups but stubborn and has her opinions and likes to bug her brother

her first three lines in the story:

(Omits action) Alden, stop it! I hit in here five minutes ago!”

(Omits action) “Good morning. I didn’t burn the house down so that’s encouragi…

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@maryg3

yes I did come up with a name; The Forgotten World

haha thanks glad you like the meme!

@keilah-h

i see!  you still did well 🙂

@maryg3

ahhh yes they totally ruined the Hobbit movies. Although I think they did a good job of Smaug

LoTR is my favourite book to read and I’ve listened through it several times too! Cool that you listen through it too! I have the  unabridged audiobook copy narrated by Rob Inglis. I can fall asleep listening to that book now lol

i am cu…[Read more]

@maryg3

Hi!! Welcome!

Sounds like you are writing some really intriguing stories! 🙂

Have you read/watched the Hobbit/Lord of the Rings?

@gracie-j whoops! sorry lol

@ben-dykes

Hi there!! Good to meet you! As far as advice, I’d say don’t be shy to ask anything you want answers for, the people on here are very friendly and even though I’ve only been on here a couple months its been so so helpful for my writing journey

I don’t bite unless provoked and am generally amiable and happy unless I’m too hot, too…[Read more]

@keilah-h

No you aren’t boring me; i don’t know what the shows are, so they might not mean as much, but i still think they’re cool! 🙂 good job! you are good at doing multiple drawings of the same character; that is one if the hardest things for me to do as an artist.

@keilah-h

wow good job!! I like them both! I like the features you gave them while keeping them human. And also the biology so-to-speak of the species and their special adaptations etc

@daisy-torres

Well this is true lol

why thank you thank you

@sami-eastwood

that sounds so cool!!

@kathleenramm

thanks!!

the only part I still like about that story is Bacon, he was a good bear that shall live on in my memory for a future story lol

@nova21  that’s so sweet, and the storyline sounds really good.

@keilah-h

whatever you wanna show me! 🙂 I like all of the above XD

@nova21

well i like it!! the idea is very cool and sounds like you have an amazing story in the making!

I’d say you could probably continue his lie through the series as long as you have a way for it to be easily triggered, and words can do that. If he believes/believed he’s unloved, there would be insecurity. When people are insecure, comments…[Read more]

@keilah-h

wow!!! good job!! I like em! 🙂 keep it up!

@kathleenramm yours sounds great! the glassblower is a very cool idea and I’d totally give it a good grade if I was a teacher. Either way it sounds great!! The glassblower idea is amazing (sorry repeated myself lol)

@godlyfantasy12 I admit I laughed out loud but that is a hilarious and great idea XD maybe the older sibling could have bribed them…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I agree with @gracie-j @devastate-lasting and @daisy-torres

As Lin said, I wouldn’t show my writing to most people at my church or people in general that are not my peers because my books are not for kids and the majority of adults would wonder what on earth I’ve been reading and watching to come up with such stuff. not that’s…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

I just saw how long my post was after I posted it, (sorry about that).