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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Elissa
Elissa’s eyes widened when Crosshair pulled out a rifle. She watched as he handled it expertly, obviously knowing how to use it. He stepped through the open door into another hall, Elissa behind him. She shut the door loudly behind herself and followed Crosshair down the hall. “Where should we look?” she asked.
Crosshair didn’t…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
milo
Milo watched as the door slammed behind Elissa and Crosshair. He slid down the wall across from the bedroom. Beth sat down beside him. “You never answered my question. What happened to Carmen and Carter? Are they safe?”
He hesitated before carefully answering, “I’m not sure. We all got split up when Aurivis, the…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Elissa
Elissa hummed after Crosshair answered her. His world seemed similar to hers, having both Maglevs and skyscrapers instead of, well, castles. Her examples might have not been the best or most descriptive of her world, though, with her own inclination toward music and Milo’s weird obsession with anything related to magnetic…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Elissa
They paced down the hall, yet again in awkward silence. “I’ve noticed that the creatures here always seem to come from different places… different worlds.” Crosshair’s voice broke through the silence. “What’s your like?”
“Well,” she said, thinking, “I’m not really sure to explain it. It’s normal to me, but- well, we have…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic CHARRIE MEME! in the forum Characters 3 years, 2 months ago
This looks like a lot of fun!
1. …I have absolutely no idea 😐😁 I have been writing on and off for so long and before that, I still created characters and stories. So it would be really hard to figure out who came first. I’ll do my character Vincen, who is probably one of the first characters that I actually fleshed out. And he…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic So…I succumbed to writing fanfiction…Help? XD in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
So… I saw fanfiction and came running, then I kept reading and saw spiderman, spies, and steampunk. I LOVE steampunk. And spiderman and spies. (I also just realized that all three start with s and that makes me happy). So uh, you didn’t tag me, but I’d love to see what you do! Very interested! 😏😁 I can try to help brainstorm…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Elissa
Crosshair’s eyes widened, the annoyance seeping out of him. “I- I’m sorry.”
Elissa stood still, tense and wary. She watched Crosshair carefully. Elissa breathed in and out slowly, thinking about what to do. “Do you- are you okay?” She asked cautiously.
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
I’m working on it now
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Poor Crosshair… 🙁😭
Elissa
Elissa trailed behind Crosshair, their footsteps echoing loudly down the stone halls. A few times she thought of maybe starting a conversation but never actually said a word. She was still calming down from being trapped in that small room and didn’t know the man in front of her at all. Why did…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
This sounds like fun! I’m not sure how much writing I’ll actually share (cause I’m a procrastinator) but I have plenty of worldbuilding and plot for my many ideas that I can share. 😂 And it’s motivation for all of us!
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Cammie
Crosshair looked around at the group and asked, “Anyone else coming? I’m fine with doing it alone.”
“I think I’ll stay,” Milo told them quickly.
“I’ll stay too,” Cammie added.
“Ok, I guess I’ll go with you,” Elissa said, glancing at Crosshair. “Although,” she added, looking back to Cammie. “We never did find that…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Pretty Prose, Please! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
I have an idea! So basically keep a journal with you (which I already do, but never use 😐) and whenever you’re sitting somewhere doing nothing describe the area around you. Just practice writing descriptions a lot. Maybe you can describe how you got there to practice transitions. So yeah! An idea😁👍
(I want to do this…
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Pretty Prose, Please! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Well… I have pretty much the same problem, so I’ll just wait here for everyone’s advice 😅🤣
I guess just know that you’re definitely not the only one who struggles with actually writing the words 😐😁
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
I researched it and you can sleep after a concussion. My brother was kept awake after got a concussion for no reason! 😅
Let Simon sleep! 🤣
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 2 months ago
Cammie
Cammie watched with furrowed brows as Simon fell asleep. She didn’t know much about first aid, but if he had hurt his head- Beth stepped out into the hall with them, closing the door behind her.
“So, who wants to stay here with me and who wants to go look for medicine?” she asked.
“I can stay,” Milo spoke up and wai…[Read more]
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Character Questionnaire! in the forum Characters 3 years, 2 months ago
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 2 months ago
@gwyndalf-the-wise that looks fantastic! I adore the way you did the hair =D
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Ava Blue replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 2 months ago
That’s weird, it looks like it finally posted something I tried posting a while ago lol
Ignore the repeat moose post
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hello everyone in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 2 months ago
Hey Meeghan! Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
I’m Thelooneyone. Like most here, I am a Christian writer, but I also enjoy music, art, and reading. I play the piano (and the clarinet a little) and like to draw and sometimes paint. Right now, I’m working on a couple of different short stories that I started years ago and never finished, and…[Read more]
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