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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 okay. That’s fine. It’s good to know your limits. We don’t want you burning out. 😉
Wellll… since you want to stick to Kara’s pov, maybe she could overhear some guards talking about what happened? Or perhaps she hears Matthias talking to a guard, receiving or giving a message from/to the Warden. This gives her suspicions…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 again, my apologies… *clears throat meekly* Telepathic dragon in the making here; I was practicing and got it wrong. *mysterious wink*
Moving on now.
No, you’re right. That’s not enough to drive an entire chapter. Unless something important happens in the sparring room, I would say cut it entirely. Writing is about change,…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 My apologies. That’s what would have gotten me stuck. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 switch POVs.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 I’ll give him a shot. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Ethryndal King @Daeus has spoken…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@Daeus shhhhh! Don’t scare the newbies!
Ah well… guess it’s too late for that. *sighs**blinks scaled eyelids happily* Yes indeed @That_Writer_Girl_99… did I fail to mention? I’m a dragon. *accidentally ignites her mug of tabasco sauce with laughing*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 you know what? That’s perfectly fine. You don’t have to be able to write it. I’ve been writing every night for four and a half years and I still don’t know how to write. I’ll never know all there is to know. But I sure wouldn’t have got anywhere near as far as I have if I’d never tackled something I couldn’t handle. It’s the…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
*grins* It’s nice to be needed. 😉
Well… I guess it depends on how devastating the Catastrophes actually were. People can spend their whole lives hiding from ugly truths that broke them hard enough. I certainly think the guilt thing would be very powerful. Not only does it tie directly into the theme, it is solely thematic in that he’s acting…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Greetings, all! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@lola-jane No problem. 🙂 Haha, makes sense!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic College Video in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Ethryndal @That_Writer_Girl_99 yep. No cats either. *runs for cover*
Ha! That can’t be it, Elizabeth, because I’m really short too. 😀 5′ 4 and 1/2″…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 perfect. All of those. Love them to pieces. You have so totally got this. *grins*
As for Matthias… *pulls on her nose in perplexity and wrinkles her forehead* How could he be the Warden’s son though if he’s an Elemental…? And I’m not sure that would really do much for your theme.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic College Video in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 *dons chainmail* I hate coffee. *angelic smile*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic College Video in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 hey… do you know that song too? I love that song…
Ahem, yes. We’re going to be fine. I suppose I could always open a video rental store. :’D
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
Welcome to KP, @Lady_Erin! 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
Welcome to KP, @Lady-Erin! 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic College Video in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
*manages to pull herself together long enough to type a reply* I’m just… so shaken. This is terrifying. I’m gonna be a failure guys. Everything I’ve worked for… all my dreams… *flings herself sobbing on the floor*
😀 😀 😀 😀 XD Hilarious @Daeus. Hilarious.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Salvete! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@Elly A lot of Veritas Press’ stuff actually. My homeschool education was basically 90% VP recommendations, so my mom rotated through a bunch of their different Latin recommendations before I eventually moved onto Wheelocks with their online academy, and that worked out really well for me.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Salvete! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@Elly that’s a great thing to be passionate about. 😉 I love history too. And logic and debate… though I love those because I love them, not because I’ve studied either in depth. 😛 Half the time I don’t even know the proper names of the things I’m passionate about. Just that they exist and I love them. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@I-J-Anderson *the mortals stand in awe* Seriously. It’s amazing how you do that. And— I think I’m gonna adopt the third one. She looks like one of mine I haven’t named yet. 😀
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