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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 11 months ago
Well…you have great points!
I think that Marcurious is an interesting one, because he’s just used to having his way and getting himself out of trouble that he doesn’t see this as any different. He sees himself as a “god” of sorts, and sees the Pythonos as just another challenge that he can overcome.
By the way, is his ability to turn…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
Pumpkin spice lattes? Or no? okay…I have never had a latte, let alone a Pumpkin Spice one. But, I do like Pumpkin Spice to begin with, so most likely yes.
Pumpkin spice lattes are THE BEST. LATTES are the best. I would totally reccomend….lol.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Hi. I'm RAE in the forum Start HERE 2 years, 11 months ago
I love that, lol.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Current WIP (badly in need of a title!) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 11 months ago
I struggle with titles a lot too!
I usually just wait until the title comes to me (after all, the story’s more important than the title), and sometimes I have a temporary title until I can come up with a good one. I would say don’t rush it, because if you’re anything like me, it’s a distraction from your actual project and you’ll…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@acancello @trailblazer @grcr @rae @sarafini @mineralizedwritings
Ottoline
She never thought that she would enjoy dancing. Not in a million years. But here she was, fighting back a smile as Hugo held her in his arms. She felt like she was turning traitor on her inner being. But somehow, she didn’t care. She didn’t want this moment to end.
When…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
He nodded and sat down with a thud, “Kari thinks the food is… is… poisoned,”
“I doubt it, you would have already been the first to pass out if it was.”
Lane was a bit miffed about Hugos not very nice, but true reaction. “Fine. It may not be, but still…” He trailed off thinking hard.haha!
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @rae @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @everyone!
Heres just a really short one, with them dancing 🙂
=-=-=-=-=-= Hugo =-=-=-=-=–
He held her waist and shoulder and led her around the dance floor. He looked over across the room and saw Lane dancing with Kari, poor Lane was bright red.
A few new g…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I will! It may take me a bit, but I can 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Do you want to write the next RP? I wasn’t sure if you wanted to or not since Hugo and Ottoline are dancing and I did the last one?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Current WIP (badly in need of a title!) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 11 months ago
Sounds great!
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@trailblazer @rae @grcr @savannah_grace2009
I love them!! Lane and Kari are so hilarious together, :rofl:
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Sorry it was short (and yet took me so long…), I didn’t know what else to say…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
lol 😂
@trailblazer @everyone
Alrighty!
Lane
Lane realized he was holding his breath, and so he silently exhaled.
He turned a little bit, staring off into the not-so-far-off distance as thousands of thoughts flew through his head. A memory of the first time he was asked to dance came into his mind… and he…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
A noise made Lane quickly look up. His eyes fell on the tall person standing in front of the door. When he noticed the green sword in the man’s hand, he shivered from head to toe. Oh boy. Must be a warrior. The… THE HOUSE PROBABLY SENT HIM TO MAKE SURE WE ALL DANCE!! I’M DOOMED.
Oh my gosh I love this that’s hilarious!!!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Sure!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Stormlight Archive in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Okay, that’s it. I REALLY want to understand these, so it’s official. Once I get done with Eragon, I’m reading the Stormlight Archive.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Soooo… Unless you all insist that I bring someone for ol’ Lane, he’s just gonna be here alone…
Lane
Too much cake. I’ve definitely eaten too much cake. His stomach began to ache. I never eat this much cake… Well, I’m never allowed to eat this much cake anyway… But it is good and I kind of want more…. I should ask mother to make one s…[Read more]
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