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@theducktator

Yeah, makes sense.

Huh…I have always loved multiple POV first person books, because then you get into the head of multiple characters! But I know it can be confusing, it just never has been a problem for me because in my mind, every character has a distinct voice.

@highscribeofaetherium

WHYYYYY

UGHHH

I forgot what I was gonna say

I know! First person books can either be super good or just…cringe..

@everyone

Why do you guys hate first person so much?????

It’s just funny because like all my writing friends in real life absolutely LOVE first person, and then on KP everyone seems to strongly dislike it!

I personally LOVE first person books with multiple pov’s….idk…they are just so fun!

@Esther-c

Haha, I love that scene! 😄

@esther-c

Hmm… That’s kinda how the first book in my series is… action-less…

Being the beginner-ish writer I am, I don’t really have any tips—but here are my thoughts anyway… (ok, maybe they’re tips…?? idk idk XD XD)

(It is hard to say much without knowing anything of your novel though… 😊)

Do you have a basic-ish overall plot at al…[Read more]

@esther-c

I would say, just use a lot of Abbie Emmons’ advice (I’m sure you’re probably doing that already though XD) and make everything that happens build the internal conflict more.

And about first person…obviously don’t do it if you don’t want to, but I think first person helps bring out the character’s voices a lot more. While the actual…[Read more]

@stephie

It worked for me! (And it looks really cute XD) I’ll submit some ideas later if I think of anything.

@stephie

I hope every apple you bite into is soft

WHAT!?!?! I can only eat apples if they are soft! I hate crunchy apples!

@esther-c

I actually don’t know what my favorite is…..

I love ALL of them!

I’ll just put Fantasy because it looks like it’s gonna win anyways…and it’s the genre of the book I’m writing XD

@stephie

ahh ok! sounds great! 😄

@esther-c

That sounds so much fun!!!! I love that idea!

@stephie

Hey, I’d love to join! My family doesn’t agree with magic, so I’ll have to sit out any books that include that element. But that’s, like, the only major thing… (besides swearing, because we don’t really agree with that either). 😄

Apparently Wyoh is being mean to me again.

@theducktator

XD XD Yeah

Happy emotional scenes aren’t as hard for me, because sometimes I’m just overjoyed for no real reason. Like the weather. XD.

Oh my goodness SAAMMMEEE! I become overjoyed over random things all the timeee!! 😂

I love my characters, I love watching them interact, (especially whe…

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@theducktator

Oh, interesting! 😀 I may have to look it up later.

@esther-c

Ahh I love this scene!! XD XD

Ev raised an eyebrow. “A little rusty?”

LOL I love that!! 😄