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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Right, she represents Eve, but is she literally Eve? Is Earth here the same Earth we know, and therefore the story of Adam and Eve is really just a translation of Rishona’s story?
Well I think that Rishona is literally Eve in my story, and Earth is the same earth we know but I think what I was going for is that there’s no Adam a…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
“What is magick?” She tested out the foreign world, mulling it over in her mind.
“Ahh, yes, I suppose you wouldn’t know,” he said airily. Rishona bristled at his mocking tone. Her stomach clenched, and she ground her teeth as her jaw hardened defiantly. What was this emotion, she wondered. She had never felt this way before. N…
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
I will! (Once I write it, lol!) I have the perfect idea in my mind so I will work on that once I finish this chapter in my WIP. 😀
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years ago
I looooooovvveeee your new pfp!!!!!💗 💗 😍 👍 💗
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Allison replied to the topic Writing about weddings and kissing and more! in the forum Romance 3 years ago
Thank you! I also played it in my mind as I was writing and was very proud of how real/funny it sounded!😂
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Allison replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years ago
And the most sweetest twins in the world! They are just soooooooo adorable! 💗 😍
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Allison replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years ago
@esther-c @whalekeeper@keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @hybridlore
Now since pics are working, here are some of my new boards!
This is Vikii, my sweet girl! I still cant stop feeling bad about all she will be going through in my WIP😭
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-GRCR- posted an update 3 years ago
I am a crazy person with a crazy love for my crazy characters and my crazy ideas.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago
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KydonAndWillow are now friends 3 years ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years ago
Oh… It’s working now… thank goodness….
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-GRCR- changed their profile picture 3 years ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years ago
Yes, Rishona does represent Eve in the prologue. And I do agree that I use flowery language excessively. I love your ideas, because you have helped me realize things about myself I never have before!
And about the paragraph you wrote….
“Ahh, yes, I suppose you wouldn’t know,” he said airily. The dismissive comment trigge…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years ago
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-GRCR- posted an update 3 years ago
Heh heh….
I’m coming (a little bit) closer to being done with my first chapter… -
Allison replied to the topic The Moonlit Sea and Me in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years ago
I think the second one,
“But I am neither bird nor wife and my dreams
Are shining, a full moon tonight:”
Has a better flow to it 🙂
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-GRCR- started the topic I can’t load a new profile picture… in the forum Questions and Support 3 years ago
@not-sure-who-to-tag
Hey there….
So… for the past few days, I haven’t been able to load a new pfp… and I’m not sure why…
I deleted it to add a new one…. And…. 🥺
When I add the file to start importing, the loading bar “loads” it, but my picture doesn’t change…
I don’t know what to do…. Could use some help….
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Feel free to ask me crazy (writing related) questions. lol
Alright! Here’s one crazy question… How would be/feel if all the power in the world went out forever?
My book is dystopian and an EMP happens (Electromagnet pulse aka all the power goes out for a long long time or forever. ) I want to know how multiple people would be if it went out, to make my writing seem more real! 🙂
Lol
Oof… Well, I’d probably worry a little bit, but then I’d adapt and be curious what the cause was. 🙃
I’d definitely feel a bit sad… because I couldn’t communicate with the outside world… (and I must be up-to-date on everything lol)
That is a really interesting book idea… tag me if you share it on here!
Thanks! I will definitely tag you!
You’re welcome!! 😄