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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
@everyone
Okay.
For those of you sad and mad about Cass….
I have some spoilers.
So if you hate spoilers, LOOK AWAY
I’ve been brainstorming a lot about Cass’s character, and I have come to a decision.
Cass is a perfect example of how even strong Christians give up, how someone who appears to be a superchristian can fall and crumble under…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
No that’s not overwhelming me!!! <3
Actually that makes a lot of sense.
I have to think about that XD XD (and pray about it too!) because that would work really well!!!
Aww thanks for asking!
If you look at the Prayer Requests topic I posted about how I’m doing (sorry I’m tired and don’t feel like retyping all that lol)
But…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
This one’s for you.
@anyone-else I know this scene isn’t my best, but I’m super tired and brain-dead…and I just felt like writing something XD
Chapter 15
Sef held Hanna tight to her chest.
Please be quiet, she silently pleaded, rocking back and forth.
A waft of the rancid odor escaped through the secret door overhead, and Sef…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
Thanks for reading it!!!!!!! <3
Idk if I’d call it a resistance, but all I can say is that light always prevails over darkness!!!!!!!!!
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
@highscribeofatherium
hahaha you’re good!!!
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 1 week ago
@highscribeofaetherium @esther-c
Thanks guys <333
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
He didn’t get it sloshed over him–it was much worse and more painful, I’m afraid.
he tried to eat it when it was wayyyyyyyyyy too hot XD XD
should I make this clearer?
At first I didn’t like Eloy either…but I felt bad for him so now I do XD
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
My fantasy isn’t a typical fantasy.
It’s combining medieval times with our modern world. So there are cars like we have, and pistols, and other things you’ll see later.
The rules for my world are…there are no rules.
I’m not even sure if this works or not (the author I’m getting feedback from said that they can be combined…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
hahahaha lol
And will go through more, since she’s the main character.
YOU HAVE NO IDEA 😬😬😬
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 1 week ago
Thank you 😊😊
Yeah it blew my mind!!! I thought ADHD was just being forgetful and hyperactive, but it’s actually so much more!
ADHD runs in my family (or at least my mom sees it in several other people in my family, like my grandma)…or at least I think so. No one’s been officially diagnosed but my mom’s researched it a lot because…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
YES we love Lilitu 💗💗💗💗
I think Eloy is starting to grow on me…
I don’t like Cass anymore. He’s just annoying…the way he LEADS SEF ON drives me INSANE. (he’s 18 and SHE’S ONLY 12!!!!!)
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 1 week ago
@everyone
hey…
I’m having trouble with my mental health again.
I’ve been having really bad anxiety, especially with social situations, and just life in general. And school starts for me in less than a month and part of me doesn’t want to go back, so that’s stressful as well.
My mom also thinks I might be neurodivergent and have a type of…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 months, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle @grcr and @highscribe (CASSIAN SCENE) idk who else to tag @jonas (don’t read this if you don’t feel like it, or are busy…)
Chapter 14
A New Adventure
Sef stood in the kitchen, tears pricking behind her eyes.
The house was so empty…so vacant. It felt wrong.
Her heavy pack dug into her shoulders, an ever present reminder o…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
I don’t know, I’ll have to check a little later!
I had a great soundtrack and a great scene too…idk I just can’t make myself write that fast *cries*
But that’s over 2,000 words for the whole day (and almost to 40K for the whole WIP) so I should just be content! lol
Sounds great!
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Sara replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
WHAT.
I wish I had your attention span XD XD
I would love to…except I have to get on the computer.
Maybe tomorrow or later this afternoon (if you’re still on)?
Thanks for doing it with me!
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Sara replied to the topic Sprint Channel in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
WHAT THE HECK?!? I wrote 650 words!!!! That’s gotta be a new record! I should do this more often!
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