Mary G

@writerlexi1216

Hey Lexi!!  I’m kinda late, but I’ll read this in a minute and give you some feedback soon!!  Super excited!!!!  Three cheers for being brave!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🎊🎉😉

@e-k-seaver

Hey Em!!  I loved your story!!  Sooo good!!  I don’t really have many critiques, just watch out for some repetitive words.  And maybe give Celeste a stronger goal/personality trait?  I felt like I was reading from Melia’s POV a lot of the time (which wasn’t necessarily a bad thing 😉) cause Celeste isn’t a bold character.  I say this…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216 Aww absolutely!!! I’m glad you like it!!!

Okay so I knowww I already drew your character, BUT. The first chapter prompted this image BIG-TIME and I couldn’t resist, so heeere you go XD Hope you like it!

@joy-caroline Awwww thank you sooo muchhh!!!! That’s amazing to hear!!!

To be honest, when I first wrote it I was imagining her guardian angel, but that works too XD I love that interpretation as well!!! I kind of wanted to leave it open though. Maybe it was a long-diseased relative come to escort her to heaven, maybe it was an angel, maybe it…[Read more]

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@gracie-j It was a pleasure!!

@writerlexi1216 *high-fives back* XD

@writerlexi1216 Of course!!! And yayy!!! Oh I’m sooo glad you decided to anyway! I thoroughly enjoyed it! Haha!! Relatablee. Aww, yay! I’m glad I could 😄

@nova21 Helloo!! Glad to have you *curtsies* XD Thank you!! 😊

Awww thanks!!

This miiight sound slightly evil, but that makes me happy to hear 🤣

Thanks a ton!! You’re too sweet!!!

Ohhh yes, I like that better!! Thank you!!

Awww here’s a tissueee *hands you an invisible one through the screen so people can’t see XD* I’m sorryy <3<3<3

Haha…[Read more]

@writerlexi1216 ABSOLUTELY!!! Any time you have anything, I’ll be glad to give it a try!!! I’m serious, for your first novel, that was AMAZING. You write like you’ve been writing for years!! My first novel was literally so trashy that I have disowned it 🤣 You have this whole icy, enchanting, mysterious aesthetic behind everything AND IT’S…[Read more]

@daisy-torres

Heyo!!!  Ooo YAY!!!  I love the title…

Oh. my. gosh.  I ADORE this simile sooo much!!!

Aaahh, my eyes are watering already!! 😢

You did it again–girl, you got skills!! 😃

*cue jaw drop*

Maybe instead of “this child” again, you could write “Bridgett”?  there was a little repetitiveness.  So sad!…[Read more]

…and one for Emiyn and her brother, Iszac: (i’m running out of ideas, people–they’re just so fun to make!!! 😂)

WOOOOAHHH that was SOOOO well written!!! Your descriptions were beautifully done!!!!

@devastate-lasting

thanks!!  haha? 😂  I didn’t know it was a unisex name… 🤔

@gracie-j

thanks!!

Here’s one for Emiyn and her dad:

AHhhhhhh I LOVEEDDDD ITTTT SOOO MUCHHH!!!! I’ll read the next part asap!!!!!

@gracie-j THANK YOUU!!!! You made my week!!!