@mark-kamibaya
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Daeus replied to the topic Homework for Video 14: Theme & Villain in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@audrey-caylin Technically, no, though possibly you may be able to apply some of the principles of writing a villain to handling a negative EIL.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Maybe? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Arella-Noreen Heh, well, I live in Maryland, so no, I wasn’t there. What exactly is a Texas Christian Homeschool Prom? 🙂
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
@Kina-Lamb Whoa, plot twist! Daeus has a writing sister! And I know a lot of people have already mentioned this, but I’m going to also anyway. (please ignore my grammar 😉 ) Your photography is SO pretty! I don’t know how some people do it. I took a photography class this year, and totally flopped. 😛 Anyway, so glad you joined!
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Ethryndal replied to the topic How naming affects characterization in the forum Characters 9 years, 6 months ago
@Jenali Oh, yeah, that’s always fun. I have a hardened character with a pointy personality,and her name is Shar.
Another thing I do is take a word and write it backwards, then add or subtract letters till it sounds nice.
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Emma Flournoy posted an update 9 years, 6 months ago
@Kina-Lamb Hey, I was looking around on your blog, and can I just say that you’re very mature? Well I said it, so hopefully it’s not too odd. I loved looking through your posts—I love it so much when someone young is so mature and thinks about such important things. (And I’m specifically hoping this doesn’t sound like I’m treating you as a…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hey, Y'all! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
@Arella-Noreen Good to meet ya! We didn’t used to have many INFJs on here, but it seems like several have come on in the last week or so. 🙂 What’s your favorite book?
Also, we don’t live in TX anymore…some of us were born there, but we’ve lived in OH for about 12 years now I think. Where we lived longest in TX I think was near Lufkin. Where are you? -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic *holds breath and hopes for the best* in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Rolena-Hatfield Oh that’s RIGHT, you live in Iowa don’t you! It’s near Lansing, IA…I don’t really know where that is except that it’s up near the Minnesota border somewhere…
*heartbroken whisper* So that means you aren’t already going?@Kina-Lamb Yes! Of course it means that, and I can’t wait to see y’all there. 🙂
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
HEY @Kina-Lamb! I didn’t know you were a writer too! Awesome.
What’s your favorite book?
And what instrument do you play?
I’m looking forward to getting to know you better here.
Also to looking ’round on your website, but the computer’s being slow right now. 😉 -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago
@I-J-Anderson *gapes*
Wowwwwwww… those are amazing. You do so well with the bodily proportions— I’ve always struggled with that. Great work. -
Snapper replied to the topic How naming affects characterization in the forum Characters 9 years, 6 months ago
@his-instrument @delightinlife @ethryndal @jess @jane-maree @arella-noreen @kate-flournoy Come on, guys! I can’t keep up with you!
Arella–I use roots to make names of cities too! However, the root is so obvious at some points, that I’ll have to switch a few things around at some point so that you root lovers won’t know
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Snapper replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
@kina-lamb Woah! Mind blown! I had no idea @daeus had a little sister! Daeus, There is now a princess in the castle in that dragon story. 😛
What type of stuff do you write? What type of music do you play? How many questions can I ask you?
Welcome from the resident dragon!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writing Dares! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@his-instrument Yay! I like points!
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago
@i-j-anderson I’m glad 🙂 I’m just really enjoy drawing everyone’s characters 😀
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 6 months ago
@i-j-anderson Those are amazing! Oops! I forgot about the tattoo (and I don’t even have the excuse that it’s covered up – her shoulder is bare 😉 ) I also see what you mean about the hair – everywhere, wild and curly!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@audrey-caylin Nice work with those characters. I like the form of poetic justice that you’re using with Holly by allowing the reader to draw their own conclusions. And then role models like Skye are always great for protagonists to have.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Videos 6-8: Developing Character Arcs in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@jane-maree Good setup there. I think I got the basic gist of it. Great way to use examples to develop a character arc.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Eight: Flat Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 6 months ago
@jane-maree Yep. Often we look up to people precisely because they’ve been able to grow a lot in the past. Great examples!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Eight: Flat Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 6 months ago
@jane-maree Yep. Often we look up to people precisely because they’ve been able to grow a lot in the past. Great examples!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@overcomer I think either could work. You could make one the primary theme and the other a major supporting theme, or you could say they’re the same theme viewed from opposite angles. Your theme could then be purpose with the focusing question of “How do you discover and embrace your destiny?”, or, from another angle, the theme could be…[Read more]
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Thank you so much for the kind words, Emma! (That’s funny. Did you read my, “but be an example,” post? Not at all. I’m not offended if people say I’m young anymore. ) Out of curiosity, (I’m a very curious person!!) how old do you think I am? I haven’t told anyone yet, and I extremely enjoy hearing people guess how old I am. : )
Yep, I read at least part of that post…I always want to be sure I’m not hurting someone’s feelings, but I wanted to be extra careful after seeing that. 😉 I was pretty sure you’d not have a problem with that anymore though.
Hey, I’m a very curious person too, so you’re in good company. 🙂 I’m pretty sure I already know how old you are—12 or…[Read more]
@Kina-Lamb Are you 12 or 13?
13. And let me guess… you’re probably 15 or 16?
Yup, 16. How’d you guess that?
Well, I looked up your first introduction post, and you said then that you were fifteen, and it was dated nine months ago. From that I concluded that you were either almost 16 or 16. 😀
Aha, a very logical course of action. 🙂
Hi @emma-flournoy ! Do you have any ideas on how to describe an angry knocking on a door? I was thinking like a “Bang. Bang,” but then I thought it might be mistaken for gun shots. I thought about “Thud. Thud,” but it sounds kind of soft, do you think? It’s Turkish soldiers banging on the door of my great-grandpa’s house that I want to describe. Thanks!
Hey Kina!
You’re right, the ‘thud’ sounds kind of soft. ‘Bang’ is a little bettter, and I don’t think it’s too similar to guns, but it is very common. So…crack…pound…hammer…? Those wouldn’t all work the way you had it—the word repeated twice slowly. I mean, it would sound a little weird. ‘Hammer. Hammer.’
Hm. 😛 If you wanted to…[Read more]
@Kina-Lamb Did you find something to work?
@emma-flournoy oh sorry! I meant to reply to this. For now I’m just doing “Knock. Knock. Knock.” As I read over great grandpa’s story, I realized that the Turk soldiers weren’t really angry, they were just a little rough, so “Knock Knock Knock” sounds better to me now than it did before. I am going to add some background information before that. I…[Read more]
@Kina-Lamb Great! *high-five*