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@thearcaneaxiom

I think you’re fine. As long as the person you’re critiquing is okay with it of course. 🙂 (And I know Light was)

@lightoverdarkness6

Thank you girl!! Oh good! Yeah, Dylan is pretty cool lol. 🙂

You’re so welcome!!

Out of curiosity… do you have a moodboard for Dylan?? XD

@felicity

Thx!! 🙂

@mineralizedwritings

Sadly I haven’t been birding in a long time because it’s not safe to go alone, and uh family issues… so yeah it’s been a hot minute. We live near a super cool wildlife refuge though, it has so many birds! I’ve seen a couple great horned owls there, if you go in the winter evening it’s the best. They start courtship in winter,…

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@mineralizedwritings

Yeah, you don’t want to make other people feel like the student. I think complimenting things you like about other peoples stories too helps, it shows even though there are things about the writing you might have a lot of information about changing, there are still things in the writing that you find admirable. It can even b…

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@sarahsmile

Hi Sarah! I’m TheArcaneAxiom. I love math, physics, worldbuilding, conlanging, and many other nerdy things. I love to read and write SSF stories, and exploring themes of divine, fundamental truths of reality.

Questions!!!

What intrigues you about history?

You said you like mysteries, do you enjoy writing them? If so, how do you…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Finished school, so now I can get to this RP!!!! 😎😁

How. I haven’t even started walking to school yet. You lucky homeschoolers.

Not gonna lie…I love Aurivis…😂😁😎😉

Aw, thanks! I’m surprised, tho… he is a bit pompous and arrogant

@esther-c

What is your favorite food or meal?

Dante: I like a lot of different kinds of fruit from different planets, especially ones that are really juicy. The few edible plants that grow on my planet are always tough and dry.

Ellie: I like my mom’s cooking.

Eddie: Oh! My favorite food is jello berries.

Ellie: Those are more like c…[Read more]

@felicity

Watermelon on pizzaaaaa

(Lana’s favorite food sounds delicious too)

@thearcaneaxiom

Ehhh I cut out the Jabberwocky character. She (yes, it was a girl :/ ) was dumb. I do have the original Jabberwocky, though, and the Boy with the Vorpal Sword.

@loopylin

Thanks! The beginning seeds of it started during 2020. Again though, the cool thing about it is that it allows so much change in worlds. If I have a different world or story I want to tell, the magic system works in such a way where it can be put in seamlessly. So me and my sister also have too many story’s but we essentially just make…[Read more]

I should add that I was a little kid when we played that Wonderland game

@thearcaneaxiom. Whoa, that’s some really cool world building! I never give enough attention to a single story to get something like that. I have too many different stories. How long have you been working on that?

@whalekeeper Cool topic! I have a lot of stories that have gone through a big changes like this.

The one that’s changed the most is my Wonderland WIP that started off as a game I would play with my cousins. In the game, we were all decedents of the main Alice in Wonderland characters (Alice, the White Rabbit, the Mad Hatter, the Cheshire Cat, a…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah! That actually sounds like a cool story I’d read. It sounds like an Alien learns about human trauma, or experiences it or something, right? That would be really cool! It could get into complex themes of what it means to be human and stuff.

I totally change my worlds constantly! My current one me and my sister are working on has…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Yeah, I’m glad your working on that. Study would be the best option yeah. Just remember there’s always another way to explain something!

@mineralizedwritings

I get that! Sometimes it’s hard to feel how much to share, imo if somebody asks for help, you can go all out on whatever they asked for help with. I’m a little cautious, so unless it’s somebody I know, I don’t give much advice unless asked of it.

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@loopylin @thearcaneaxiom  @e-m-trempke

Yes, I have Prime Video. Thank y’all! I’ll try to find it sometime.

@esther-c

Oooh. That sounds so interesting!! I enjoyed reading it and am now even more intrigued in your story!! Dylan sounds really cool! 😀

Thank you girl!! Oh good! Yeah, Dylan is pretty cool lol. 🙂

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! Yeah, that clears things up a lot. Sorry if I made too many assumptions, thanks for elaborating! Does 5 not seem a little old though? That’s the age most children begin school. You say that he still remembers, but comprehension of mom, dad, and sibling names would long since been well ingrained into his mind at that point. I…

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