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@savannah_grace2009

Alright, so I finally got a chance to catch up again.

I actually don’t have too many comments on the latest 3 chapters as far as critiques go other than maybe Neveah’s part. I’m all for her having sudden resolve of vengeance, feeling intense emotions of anger and hatred, but it also felt perhaps a bit too sudden. Right now…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

You could stick Felicity (and the twins too!) in with Riya. I think her original roommates have kind’ve disappeared…

And Lois could room with Tirion and @keilah-h ‘s Crosshair and Tech!

Ok, thanks! That’s really helpful.

@fernweh_grace

That sounds like so much fun. I love thunderstorms and candles. I’d love to read what you wrote. Did you post it already somewhere else?

@euodia-vision

Thanks! 😊

@loopylin

Ooooh! I really like it!!

@mineralizedwritings

well… you can barely see it… darn.

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you so much!!

Lol go ahead and use it for a bit if you like! I’m not terribly attached because it was just a sketchy thing XD

Of course!

Ooooh, really? Well, since freedom’s currently using it I’ll put it as my cover image…

@whalekeeper

Maybe before the dance, we shop for outfits? There are so many shops nearby! The whole school could cancel classes today for it!

And some of the boys have yet to ask the girls! 😈

YES! But yeah, we should for sure wait for Godly, she was so excited.

I can’t remember who was going to ask Riya… I think @freedomwriter76 ‘s Bucky. But…[Read more]

@esther-c

Aww, thanks girl! I guess I haven’t really shared much writing on here lately. But I’ve started on the first draft of the second book, so I’ve been getting a lot more actual writing done. (Instead of just editing… editing… editing… 😂)

Of course! OH YAY!! So has editing book one been the main thing? How has it gone?

@smiley

I’m loving it!!

Oh wait here I changed the colors slightly (you probably can’t even tell lol)

@whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @anyone (y’all can ignore these tags if you want)

This is a full Rina drawing I’ve been working on for a while.

@highscribeofaetherium

Thank you for explaining 😅 I’m not a science person, so I don’t have a good grasp on all that stuff. Thanks.

That’s alright, lol! This is very helpful actually, because I need to know how much my readers know, so I can explain things properly, and not annoy them with too much explanation at the same time.

I don’t find her t…

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@whalekeeper

Ok, thanks! I can stick Felicity in the same room as the twins and some other girls and then I guess Lois can go… somewhere… eh, I’ll figure it out.

I know it’s a long shot, but Marcel might ask one of the twins to the dance. If they get to know each other. He loves origami 😊

That would be so awesome! Origami is Ellie’s favorite…[Read more]

Also, @whalekeeper , I know I’ve asked this a few times already, sorry, but how can I figure out who my character’s roommates are?

@peeps

Ok, here’s my lil alien dudes

Eddie: female, about 14 in human years ish, 3’ tall, green eyes, long brown hair in a French braid, tan skin with some green coloring, long unicorn-like tail, wears a white tank top and dark pants

Ellie: Eddie’s identical twin sister, chin length brown hair, wears a sky blue hoodie

Eddie

Eddie was dying…[Read more]

@grcr

Ooo I love this one and the other character ones you’ve posted! Your story seems really cool.

I should start making mood boards again…

@freedomwriter76

NO! *grabs Riker and Leon* don’t take ma bois from me!!!! I shall give them blankets and coco myself, thank you very much! XD

lol you better 😆

this new 😀 emoji is creeping me out just a lil bit…XD

hehe yeah sometimes my friends use that emoji when they’re trying to be threatening

@hybridlore

I can’t really think of anything right now, but I’ll definitely think it over and get back to you on it!

@freedomwriter76

Those all look so cool!

why are all my charries so saddddd 😭

Well, I don’t know. Do I need to steal them from you so they can have a break and give them each a blanket and cup of hot coco? XD

@rae

Sounds good!! I love your style, btw. It’s fresh and unique. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t think it’s too clunky. There may be a few places where it could be made a little smoother, but I’m not sure how to fix that. 😅 If this is just your first or second draft, then I think it’s definitely fine how it is. 🙂