@magicalstories0611
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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@jonas @rae @highscribeofatherium @acancello @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer
Ok, so I think I’ve caught up with everything now. XD
(I’m most active during the afternoons, so I think I miss it when y’all are most active. (: )
Oh boy, Hedieh’s at the forge. 🫢 That could be dangerous.
And for swords/weapons and such, in Amir’s actually story, he…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Lol I love that Calligrapho is mistaking Dante’s impulsiveness for intelligence hehe
Dante
Shopping? That’s what this was all about? He truly didn’t understand why anyone bothered going to school if this was what it was like.
“By the way, however did you know that fire unstuck pixie glue? And how did you not get burned?…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Blade's Will in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Nice! Would this actually count as a full short story? I couldn’t detect any full plot, but maybe it’s there. One piece of advice my writing teacher gave us for our short story assignment was ‘make sure you write a short story and not just a scene.’ Putting aside whether it counts as a short story, it’s a really good snapshot/scene at least.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Dante
“How do you know I’m not enrolled here?”
Calligrapho raised an eyebrow. “No offense, but you don’t exactly look like a student.”
Dante looked down at himself. His clothes were dirty, his feet were bare, and his shoulder was scratched up and slightly bloody from the night before.
He chuckled. “Fair enough. Yeah, I’ll stay wit…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Blogs! in the forum Non-Fiction 2 years, 10 months ago
@janellebelovedpig @hybridlore @acancello
Thank you all so much!! I’ll definitely keep it all in mind. (:
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Esther replied to the topic Character Development Theme List! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
This is a really neat idea!!
Here’s a few of mine: (some of them are kinda similar to each other or are from the same character)
- Accepting the fact that you’re not perfect and you don’t have to be
- Learning that you don’t have to please everyone
- Standing firm in what you know to be true and right, even when those around…
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
XD
Dance party turned dragon-slaying quest I love it
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Development Theme List! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Cool topic idea! (Again)
I really struggle with simplifying my characters’ arcs/development into a single phrase or sentence, but here’s some attempts. (I wont say which characters they belong to)
- overcoming guilt/living like someone who is forgiven
- letting go of anger and bitterness
- overcoming fear of the future/ the…
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Dante
“Uh, Dante. Tucker,” he said, unsure if he was supposed to add more, or if his name was sufficient enough.
He glanced around the crowd once again, but only met strangers’ suspicious stares. He turned back to Calligrapho and gave him back his jar.
“That’s a bit of a long name. Mind if I call you Cal?”
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago

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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I needed to contribute to the memes…
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago

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Loopy replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 10 months ago
🤣 I love them
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Burning the glue off will be Dante’s first instinct anyway, so that makes things easy.
Dante
Something tickled Dante on the shoulder as he followed the crowd of students. He brushed it off and kept walking. Again, something touched his other shoulder. This time, it felt like someone poking him with a twig. He glared over his shoulder,…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Blade's Will in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Yep, that is the intention. The question, however, is why?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic Blade of the Void in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, although in this story at least, I don’t find Adikar particularly interesting, he’s actually fairly flat. But he would probably be more interesting earlier in his career.
What I would want to see is his degradation into what he eventually became. It would have to be really subtle though, and feel like this could be a process that you…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Why is the pixie named Styx? Is he undead or something? Idk I’m just thinking of the river.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, he could board with them. He isn’t technically enrolled in the school, though, he’s just using it as cover. So Calligrapho might have to invite him or something.
Lol I can’t believe they just knowingly made a deal with Rumpelstiltskin for a couple dresses. XD
I’m creating my own language with the same pronounciation as Welsh, s…
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