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@savannah_grace2009

Fynn

He dropped his gaze to the floor and didn’t speak for a moment. “I’m not offended… I just…” He sighed, tossing his bangs out of his eyes with a flip of his head. “I guess I am a little… self-centered, am I?” He gave a quick chuckle. “I just don’t want to… to lose her…” he softly said the last part, but pasted on a smile…[Read more]

@jonas

Ok, that makes more sense. I was gonna ask, what frame of reference does it stop in motion, so the infinite inertia idea does kinda help. I’ll still have to ponder on how that works on the temporal aspect though.

@jonas

Interesting! I love the high contrast magic systems. Giving me Star Wars vibes actually with the light side and dark side users, and grey Jedi. Question on the positive temporal pulse. What does it mean for the object to be frozen in time, and therefore unmovable?

(I’ve rewritten the beginning of my main WIP so many times. 🤣)

@savannah_grace2009

Okay! Yeah, I get that and I’ve been trying to work on that.

Awesome!

Okay so question-I’ve heard a lot of people (in videos on novel writing) say that you shouldn’t start with your character waking up to start their morning. So should I change how I start the story? I’d still have the same scene where Neveah tells Sef that sh…

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Arden, a character that @ava-blue and I kinda share 

Here’s some sketches because I’m bored rn

@savannah_grace2009

Ok! So I finally have some feedback for your WIP. (Sorry it took so long 😭)

In the first chapter, the biggest thing I noticed was a lot of telling/info-dumping. It’s not wrong to give some background in the first chapter, but the key word is “some.” I felt like there was a lot of information about her father and how he had d…[Read more]

Though Ransom could just be a nickname some people call him…

@whalekeeper

He sounds awesome!!

Some name ideas…

• Axel
• Jett
• Orion
• Zayn
• Roscoe
• Benedict
• Kieran

@savanah_grace2009

Fynn

Fynn chuckled to cover how awkward his question had become. He fumbled with his bangs for a second, then put his hand back on Liv’s arm. “Well… there was one today…” He cast another glance Callie’s way and sighed. “She was trying to invite Chase to come to the dance and even invited him to come with us. I wasn’t exactl…[Read more]

@walkbyfaith @grcr @beth-torres @anyone-else-on-this-topic

So I haven’t been reading with the same plan y’all are doing, but I have been going through Genesis on my own. I think the thing that’s stood out to me the most is the beautiful balance of God’s justice and mercy. I’ve only made it as far as after the Flood, but still, I can see that God…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Just saw the second drawing and I love it. Totally want to read that scene

@lydibug

Thanks!

@scoutfinch180

Is this meant to be a regular outfit?

Yes, for now. She also has her spacesuit that she wears sometimes. I’ve been struggling with trying to make a outfit that looks sci-fi but is also cute and playful and fits her personality.

@scoutfinch180

Whoa those are really cool and have really pretty colors. Is it Artemis and Apollo?

Oh my word this was so long agooo!! It will be a year in a couple months!! 😱

It feels like it was at least two years ago to me.

@everyone

Ok, you guys can totally continue this and have fun, but I’m not going to be running the games anymore cuz I had no idea what I was doing and I’ve run out of motivation. Also, I’m pulling my characters…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

XD Has school started again for you yet? (…If you’re still in school?)

No. By some miracle, I graduated last year, and I’m not doing college, at least not yet.

Oh my word this was so long agooo!! It will be a year in a couple months!! 😱