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@jonas

Just so I know, where would the best place on the forum be for that? I’m stilling getting used to everything.

Hmmm, there’s actually quite a few places. You can go through the General Writing Discussions page, and look through the most active forums, like the Place to Share… is one, but I would probably make my own on General Writing D…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6 Yeah that sounds great!

@loopylin

I haven’t been active in the castle in a while either. It’s kinda been dead. I don’t even know when the last time I RPed in here lol XD

If no one else wants to I could have one of my new characters meet yours? I’m just barely coming up with their design so they really need to be expanded on 😅

@loopylin

Awww cute!! I love the siblings (especially Cody 🥰)

@jonas

With Dynamism, it will either be the same direction as the original object or the direction of the user’s choice. My decision will probably be based on balance. I would say Dynamism is probably the most powerful ability, so it might make sense to give it that limitation.

That makes sense, I would lean towards the limitation as well. It m…[Read more]

@jonas

Wow, that is a very interesting system. I think I get it, but that might be the most technical magic system I’ve ever seen. I like how it seems that you’re basically inventing your own science for your world.

Thanks! That is basically the idea, all conventional physics I threw out the window, not to be replaced by absurdity, but simpl…[Read more]

@jonas

Ok, now for yours, these sound like really fun magic systems! I can definitely see the Sandersonisms, but they’re still definitely their own thing.

The Crystal magic system reminds me a bit of my own, as it is about crystalline structures manipulating fundamental aspects of reality. I do have a question on Dynamism though, when kinetic…[Read more]

There we go.

Jack, Cody, and Kate

The Celby siblings stood facing each other in a cramped stone closet, lit only by the light coming in from underneath a splintered wooden door. The air was musty and smelled vaguely of soap.

“What in the devil- ”

“Jack. Language.”

“Sorry. But where are we?”

Cody scratched the back of his neck and mumbled, “I thought one o…[Read more]

Alright, I’m adding three characters instead of two. They just aren’t the same without the others. Here’s the physical descriptions:

Jack: 17, white blond fluffy hair that covers his eyes, tan skin, linen pants and shirt, thin wool vest, sandals

Cody: 15, really fluffy hair, long droopy pointed ears, freckles, cute button nose, button down shirt…[Read more]

Um what the heck my thingy disappeared

Also any other characters of mine who were in here before are gone

Alright, I’m adding three characters instead of two. They just aren’t the same without the others. Here’s the physical descriptions:

Jack: 17, white blond fluffy hair that covers his eyes, tan skin, linen pants and shirt, thin wool vest, sandals

Cody: 15, really fluffy hair, long droopy pointed ears, freckles, cute button nose, button down shirt…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas

I actually started a magic system forum a while back, but it fizzled out.

Personally, I’m very much a hard magic system kind of guy. As to the magic system of my and my sister’s universe, I’ve found it hard to properly approach in explanation, because there’s so many different layers to it, and when I try to explain…[Read more]

@kydonandwillow

Welcome to Kingdom Pen!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, fiction-writing, God-loving, teen girl!

Time for some questions!

1. Who’s your favorite character to write? Why?/What are they like?

2. Who’s your favorite character from either a movie/tv show or book/series?

3. If you c…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

No not really, but I’ve heard of both of them before. It sounds like you’d recommend them…?

@godlyfantasy12

There are a couple things that have helped me in situations like this.

First, try to mentally plot backwards. You don’t have to write stuff out or make an outline, unless you think that will help you more. But start at one point, somewhere in the middle or even the end and work backwards. How did they make it here? What did t…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

He never fixed that leaky pipe he was working on. It’s gonna leave a big mess in that hall and his boss is gonna be mad (whoever that is).

@godlyfantasy12

OH MY GOSH, YESSSSS!

I just got into TOP! I’ve been listening to the Vessels album a lot. Anything by them you’d recommend?

(and yes, i’d agree that their stuff sounds a little weird at times. XD it takes some getting used to.)

And I LOVE NF too! His stuff has been pretty depressing in the past but his new album HOPE is SO…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Hey, I know we all love Pax so we’re totally fine with it. 😂 I haven’t been involved much but by reading everything on the sideline I can tell everyone is very invested so don’t sweat it.