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Jack 

“I don’t believe so…” he glanced back at his other companions to see if they possibly did.

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@rae Ok so I have three characters in this group who are all siblings: Jack, Cody, and Kate. They all have two little horns on their heads like a fawn, and they all wear their bangs over their eyes. Also, they have country accents.

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Kate

A boy stumbled into view and suddenly froze as he saw Kate and…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr @rae @mineralizedwritings

Thanks you so much guys!! All your advice has helped so much! I feel much more confident about editing this chapter now. ❤️

(And Rae, I would never get rid of the donut scene EVER. I love it too. 🥰😁)

@jonas

Ok, yeah that makes sense.

So Something that I have wondered about the Cosmere ever since I’ve begun learning about it is what is the real nature of the Shards as far as are they needed in the universe for the relevant ideal to be present. Take Honor for example. Honor’s ideal obviously influences Roshar significantly, being a fundamental part of religion, culture, magic,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Alright, I think that’s fine. I think that the prospective split up into multiple books is ultimately the better call.

New Dante sketches

@rae

Hello! Mostly everyone is going shopping for fancy clothes for the dance coming up, except for Caly and my characters, who are going on a hunt for a somewhat evil pixie.

@calyhuge

Dante

“Fascinating. All I can do is write fast. That enchanted box you use to summon fire is also very interesting. Now, hold on a second and I’ll write all this down.”

“It’s not enchanted, it’s…” Dante muttered, but trailed off as he watched Calligrapho’s hand blur across a page of his book.

“Here’s what I’ve got so far: ‘ Dante – H…[Read more]

@grcr

It is hard to say much without knowing much of your book, but I do agree with what Sara said as far as openings…

Ok! If you do wanna read the chapter, I posted it like two posts above this one.

I guess it depends on the reader, but personally, I like books that paint some of the picture in the first (and even second) chapter… even if it seem…

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@savannah_grace2009

Ugh, sorry you’re going through that! That’s hard!

Yeah, thanks. XD My NaNo WIP feels so much easier because it’s so new, lol.

Could you maybe post some segments of it so I can see more of what you mean?

I posted the first chapter in the post above this one.

All I can say is that maybe you’re focusing a little too much on all…

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@rae

What’s the first paragraph of your book?

So, the first paragraph doesn’t have much info in it since it’s only a few lines, but I’ll share the original first chapter so you can see what I’m talking about. (Hopefully. XD) In a day or two, I’m hoping to have an alternate first chapter written, so I may share that just to see if y’all think…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oof, those are hard questions. For the first one, I get what you mean. I think for the first chapter, an introduction is fine. Personally, I would try to focus on the relationship between Ami and Ev, and his family conflict, because I think that will hook the reader.

Yes, definitely. XDXD

Ok, yeah. I think I already have a few ideas…[Read more]

I’d love some help if you guys have any tips or advice to contribute 👆😊

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I don’t want to make a whole other topic for this, so I’m posting my question(s) here. XD

So, I’m having some trouble editing my WIP. (This is not my NaNo WIP. I was ahead on NaNo, so I decided to do some editing today). Originally, the first chapter wasn’t the most exciting. It was more a slice-of-life kind of thing that introduces who one of…[Read more]

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@savannah_grace2009

That’s awesome!! So happy for you! 😊

@jonas

Ok cool. I’ll think about putting in a villain.

Although I do have a few cool villains up my sleeve….