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@esther-c

I generally like third person more than first person. Both are good though, so do what you think works best. Just because it’s popular doesn’t mean it’s best. I can’t help much with the rest, because I’m having the same problem. Some books that do this well are The Penderwicks, The Vanderbeekers, Cheaper by the Dozen, and The Melendy Quartet.

I guess I should tag some peeps. Don’t feel obligated to reply 🙃

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @stephie @theducktator @acancello @mineralizedwritings @hybridlore @beth-torres @smiley @grcr @keilah-h @loopylin @rae @trailblazer @lightoverdarkness6

So I need help.

XD

I’ve been plotting in my head for a contemporary novel that I’m really excited about. I love the concept, the characters, and even the setting so much! I just need a better structure for my plot. So far I’ve been writing random scenes, I just have a feeling that when I finally sit down to write the book in whole, it’s not gon…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

1.      Is Riker’s sudden panic/possible panic attack realistic? If not, does anyone that has experienced a panic attack have any pointers? (I’ve only been on the brink of one once…it was not fun🫠)

I felt like it was pretty realistic, but I’ve also never written anything like that before or experienced something like it. I a…[Read more]

Hey, everyone!! Just so y’all are aware, I’ll probably begin posting the next polls sometime after Easter. (:

1. Oh and I don’t think him walking slowly and carefully quite fits? It totally could work and you can ignore me here, but typically you’re in either fight, flight, or freeze mode during a panic attack. You’re not thinking logically, you’re just acting on fear. Obviously he’s not going to fight, so I think it would make more sense if he was eithe…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

1. I think it was pretty accurate except that he was thinking in full sentences. Typically when I’ve had an anxiety attack, my thoughts come in scattered fragments or images. Usually it’s only a couple words or a phrase on repeat or it’s just pure emotion and physical symptoms. Nothing really makes sense in the moment and m…[Read more]

Dante

Dante suppressed a yawn.

He had slept in late in the motel room after getting almost no sleep when he was outside the night before. He was exhausted from exploring, hunting pixies, and peer-pressured dance lessons. When he had finally woken up in the morning, he found Jr’s bed unsurprisingly empty.

Dante had left a sloppy note thanking J…[Read more]

@keilah-h Thanks!

How much wood could a woodchuck chuck if a woodchuck could chuck wood?

How much ground could a groundhog hog if a groundhog could hog ground?

How much cars could a carpet pet if a carpet could pet cars?

How much chaps could a chapstick stick if a chapstick could stick chaps?

Ubi est mea anaticula cumminosa?

If Moses supposes his toeses are…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Is the question not “what is the answer to life, the universe, and everything”?

But why is it 42? Why not 56, or 21 or 3.1415926535897932384626433?

Who put the bop in the bop shoo bop shoo bop?

Who put the dip in the dipshidipdidip?

Would a fish have as many toes as fins? Would a cow have as many wings as a buffalo?

If buf…[Read more]

@stephie

That’s what happens when a page is full. It pushes you to the next page, but the next page doesn’t exist yet. It’s a bug that should be brought up to Kathleen.

Has this Forum been inactive for too long?

@theducktator

Who put the Ram in the Ramalamadingdong?

Who put the bop in the bop shoo bop shoo bop?

If Pinocchio says “My nose will grow longer right now”, will it?

Can you trust when a statement says “this statement claims to be a liar paradox, but it is lying”?

How many toes does a fish have, and how…

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@stephie

Hmmm, I’m not sure about that. Could you elaborate on what you mean? Are you speaking in a moral and/or historical context? Because there’s a lot of things outside of scripture we can know, even in a moral context.

@stephie

I have been found out. 😬 That was a wise decision. I am now trying to narrow my two hundred suggestions down to only two.😆

@godlyfantasy12

We’ve all cheated Wyoh by sharing pics through links. Canva’s free, all you have to do is make an account and upload the pic to a design. Then share the link so anyone can view.

But if you don’t want to do that then… idk, yeah whatever 😂

@stephie

Ah, gotcha. That makes sense.

Oh, cool!!

@stephie

I could only think of one book 😭 I’ve read so many though, I don’t even know how I could only come up with one XD Maybe I’ll think of another one later, lol.

@stephie

What’s up with that jingle? I’ve got nothing in my head but the billion songs I’m trying to keep straight for choir.

Haha 😂 Do you enjoy choir though? I did it for a year and really enjoyed it. (Until the choir director changed… then it wasn’t so fun… :/)

@stephie

So, are we only allowed to suggest two books?