@magicalstories0611
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
So, I can’t post the next chapter(s) right now, bc there are some things in it I’ve been meaning to edit. But I will post it here later today!! 😄
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Light replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
I’m thrilled you’re enjoying it!!!! THANK YOU!
Yes!! YOU’RE SO WELCOME!!!
Oh, Lyaksandro? You don’t have to worry about him…yet. 😉
Oh, no 😨! You gotta warn me when I do need to worry about him 😭😨😅
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Carmen
“Uh, th-thank you f-f-for ask-ing th-though,” Matthew stuttered. He smiled nervously and Carmen smiled back.
“Of course,” she said, leaning against the wall next to him. “I’m actually kinda freaked out too. I mean, that was a dragon. I thought they were extinct!” She sighed, her eyes distant, no l…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@loopylin Oh man, Carmen coming over there is just gonna…well you’ll see 😂.
@mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @esther-c @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyonMatthew
“Who are you?!” Lyla shouted.
“Quite a lot of fire for such a little girl,” the voice rumbled. “Who am I? The humans used to call me Aurivis, if that is what you mean…[Read more] -
Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Anddd here’s Lyla!

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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Here’s my baby Matthew!!

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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Yay!!! Welcome back!!
Cuz I really wanna be Paxton again….XD AND MEET MATTHEW…AND THE SISTERS…AND TAUREN….AND…AGGHHH
Oh, YES!! I want Paxton and Matthew to meet!!
And I also miss Freedom’s boys but thats a separate issue XD XD XD
Yeah, we all miss Freedom, but it’s good that she’s spending time with her family. I think she said…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
I’m not sure if you still want these, but here’s my character descriptions:
Carter: 14-15ish, yellow blond hair, light brown eyes, freckles, average height, has a constant desire to know everything which gets him in trouble a lot
Carmen: around the same age as Carter, shoulder length wavy strawberry blonde hair, blue eyes I thi…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Forum For Pictures of our Charries!! in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
Aaaa! I love all your charries! November! And Lyn! And your right, Grim is pretty handsome 👀. There’s no way I can pick a favorite, tho.
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 Ok, good night!
@mineralizedwritings That was a really cool description of Aurivis! I think Carter’s reaction is going to be very similar to Tauren’s.
@esther-c @keilah-h @theloonyone
Carter
The huge green eye shifted from person to person. Carter froze, staring at the slit pupil and the scaled skin.
No way. It’s a drago…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @loopylin
Yeah, That sounds good! These six will be together! 😊 Yes, a very shaken Matthew 😂.
I’ll RP in the morning. I gotta got to bed. Talk to you in the morning!! 😊
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Light replied to the topic Russo-Ukrainian War Novel. Please Critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Oh my gosh girl!!! That chapter was soooo good 😊❤️👍!! I loved it!! But oh no, what happens to Lyaksandro?!?! I must know 😂!! But omg girl, I absolutely loved it!! Great job!!
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Whoops messed up ur tag again @lightoverdarkness6
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness
I don’t want Carter, Matthew, Layla, and Carmen to split up, so I think I’ll join that group. That leaves five characters in the other group I think, including my dragon. Is that ok?
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h
this isn’t really from any particular person’s pov, so…
“Who are you!?” Lyla shouted.
The creature shifted its position outside the window, revealing pale gold scales. It huffed, momentarily fogging up the glass.
“Quite a lot of fire for such a little girl,” the…[Read more]
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
@esther-c @loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h
Matthew
“I’m Lesli.” Tauren’s…girl friend? said, reaching out her hand towards the Lyla.“I see we both have nervous little brother problems?”
Oh no!! Is-is- she going to make fun of me?
Of COURSE she will!! I told myself, who wouldn’t? You can barely say hi to someone new witho…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 9 months ago
Can’t wait to see your revised version! I think I like the title Afterthoughts the best
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Loopy replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Carmen’s 14/15 ish. She doesn’t really know
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Light replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 9 months ago
Nah, he’s fine. It’s an old, scarred up injury.
Oh, okay.
Awwww 🥰 How old is Matthew again? Hehe, I’m not sure what Carter would think of that 😅
Haha, yeah. Matthew is 13, almost 14. How old is Carmen? I could see Matthew telling Carter “…Um…I-I think your sister is r-really s-s-sweet…and pr-pretty..” And Carter’s kind of like…[Read more]
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