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@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6

This is probably an unnecessary detail, but does Tony have his nanotech suit or an older one?

Carter 

“Now, what are all of your names? I’m Tony. Tony Stark. Though most of you have probably heard of me.”

Carter had stood as soon as the man had opened the door. Now, he looked curiou…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Ooh! She sounds like a cool, if cruel character!

@acancello

Wow!! Those are cool! Yeah, I’ve been trying to get better at describing situations in my book as well. I like to look up ‘descriptive words for –‘ whatever I needed, and just reading them helps me to remember them for future reference. Also, if you copy and paste them into a doc, you can review them when you need it. That’s what I…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

What a cool magic system!! It sounds really unique!!

When I have the time, I’ll hop on here and share my thoughts about magic systems. 😀

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin

(Also, if it’s alright with everyone, I’m not gonna have Matthew recognize Tony, because, well…I’m not quite sure how Matthew would act around him, what he would say…it would probably be really awkward 😅. Sorry!)

Matthew

I tried to slow my rapid breathing, panic overcoming me. I stared at…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom @whalekeeper

LOL XD

Those are hilarious!! XD

@freedomwriter76

 Thank you for the prayers! ❤️❤️❤️

You’re welcome! 🙂 ❤️❤️

Yeah, I knew dandelions were edible! Really cool that y’all are working on a recipe tho! ❤️

Cool! Yeah, I’m a little worried how it will taste XD 🤫.

And thanks!!! I like my new signature too! ❤️❤️❤️

Yess!! It’s so good!

Aww Ryo!! Morgan!! Awww I bet they would be such go…[Read more]

@sarahsmile

I think my favorite L.M. Montgomery is probably Anne of Avonlea, though that might be in part because in all movie adaptations I’ve of the series they gloss over that bit of Anne’s life..

Oooh, that’s a good one! Ah yes, that is very true. Mine is Rilla of Ingleside because ✨Walter✨ XD

I haven’t read any of Alan Gratz’s books, I’ll ha…

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@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Ooh yesss Alex!!! Get him!!! Oh wow 😲. Vance better look out XD

And Bren is so precious/sweet ❤❤

Vance

Bren stared at me, brows furrowed. He bit his lip, thinking for a moment.

“But…” He started, “He’s not a puppy. He’s a person. You can’t take a person…”

I let out a sigh of annoyance, glowering at the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

History though…I obviously love that. Everyone knows that by now. 😂😂😂

WhAt?! you did?? No way!!

jk jk jk. XDXD

Cool moodboard!! 😀

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @keilah-h

SERIN

Her arm was burning. That was all Serin could feel in the blackness. She was vaugely aware of voices saying something, and her brain told her to reply. To get up.

I’m fine… Was what she tried to say to the voices, but she wasn’t sure if the words actually came out or not. She tried to pull t…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Aww, Everly and Layson are adorable!!! <3

@loopylin

That was so cool! Now I want to see a scene with Serin and Kun’en fighting together

Oh thanks! Yeah as long as it wasn’t too confusing or anything. I could try to give tips but I wouldn’t know really where to start… XD

I haven’t actually written them fighting together b…[Read more]

@loopylin

DANTE!!!!! 😭😱😭

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin

Uh…I haven’t gone in a while 😅. Sorry about that. I can go in a bit, unless someone else wants to go ahead! 🙂

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Okay!! Aww thank you!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

No worries! I’ll try to do Dylan today sometime as well. 🙂

@godlyfantasy12

WOWOW!!! AHHH GRIMM!!!! No kidding @Freedomwriter76. XD

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

LOVE IT!!!

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22

So this is a really big and deep fountain, right? I’m imagining it being pretty deep.

Ellie

“Serin!” Ellie shouted as her companion collapsed to the ground.

Ellie and Allen rushed over and knelt down beside her. Ellie reached for her injured arm, but hesitated. She wasn’t sure how to remove…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Oh, I just saw your rp too. Everly and Layson are so cute!

@princesachronicle22

That was so cool! Now I want to see a scene with Serin and Kun’en fighting together

Okay so I’m still working on my action scenes, and if y’all see anything that you think I can improve on or any tips to help it flow better, that would be awesome!

Honestly, I feel like I need some tips from you. That was so much fun to read.