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There! Finally! It posted!

Part 3:

However, I think the reveal would be a lot more powerful if you set us up for it earlier on in the chapter. I didn’t know before hand that he always had his helmet on. I kinda just imagined him as a normal dude with a normal human face. I think including a description of him, his outfit, and especially his helmet, and then mentioning t…[Read more]

Part 2:

Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?

This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.

Ughhh the part 2 won’t post

Part 2:

Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?

This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.

However, I think the reveal wou…[Read more]

@rae

Um this post isn’t working so I’m going to send it in two parts to see if that helps.

Part 1:

I’m still only halfway through chapter two. Haven’t really found the time to read the whole thing though. But anyway here’s some thoughts:

This chapter is a lot easier to read for me since it’s no longer in italics and I hope you keep writing it…[Read more]

@rea

I’m still only halfway through chapter two. Haven’t really found the time to read the whole thing though. But anyway here’s some thoughts:

This chapter is a lot easier to read for me since it’s no longer in italics and I hope you keep writing it that way. There’s obviously nothing wrong with using italics. It kinda looks cooler, actually.…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Finally finished reading! I’m loving the characters. That last one with the toad was adorable.

Oh and if you want to know spoilers, I will gladly indulge. XD Plus, Amir has a love interest if anyone wants to hear about that… 🥰

Arsyn Dabir’s moodboard…

Amir’s moodboard…

@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @rae @spinner4him @smiley @grcr @hybridlore @whalekeeper @anyone-else-that-might-be-interesed

Ok… I’m so excited because I’m finally sharing my WIP idea for NaNo!!!

I think it’s the only WIP that I’ve actually put a lot of thought into before actually…[Read more]

@euodia-vision

Ooooh, what is this NaNo WIP???

Wellll…

I won’t explain it all now because I’m planning to share more about it later today. So I’ll tag you then. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

Oh yeah, that’s a really good idea! I’ll have to keep that in mind. 🙂

@lightoverdarkness6

You’re good girl!!

I’ll try to write Ez’s POV sometime this week!

That’s annoying

@loopylin

yeah, no picture, just a normal message…

it would say it posted but nothing showed up and when I tried again it said it was a duplicate message.

The other ones came through…

idk, it’s weird.

@fernweh_grace

Argh, my posts are having trouble coming through!

I’ve been trying to say for a while that I’m loving these writing snippets! They’re really good!

Oh wait nvm

@euodia-vision Are you trying to send a picture?