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@savannah_grace2009

Ok! So I finally have some feedback for your WIP. (Sorry it took so long 😭)

In the first chapter, the biggest thing I noticed was a lot of telling/info-dumping. It’s not wrong to give some background in the first chapter, but the key word is “some.” I felt like there was a lot of information about her father and how he had d…[Read more]

Though Ransom could just be a nickname some people call him…

@whalekeeper

He sounds awesome!!

Some name ideas…

• Axel
• Jett
• Orion
• Zayn
• Roscoe
• Benedict
• Kieran

@savanah_grace2009

Fynn

Fynn chuckled to cover how awkward his question had become. He fumbled with his bangs for a second, then put his hand back on Liv’s arm. “Well… there was one today…” He cast another glance Callie’s way and sighed. “She was trying to invite Chase to come to the dance and even invited him to come with us. I wasn’t exactl…[Read more]

@walkbyfaith @grcr @beth-torres @anyone-else-on-this-topic

So I haven’t been reading with the same plan y’all are doing, but I have been going through Genesis on my own. I think the thing that’s stood out to me the most is the beautiful balance of God’s justice and mercy. I’ve only made it as far as after the Flood, but still, I can see that God…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Just saw the second drawing and I love it. Totally want to read that scene

@lydibug

Thanks!

@scoutfinch180

Is this meant to be a regular outfit?

Yes, for now. She also has her spacesuit that she wears sometimes. I’ve been struggling with trying to make a outfit that looks sci-fi but is also cute and playful and fits her personality.

@scoutfinch180

Whoa those are really cool and have really pretty colors. Is it Artemis and Apollo?

Oh my word this was so long agooo!! It will be a year in a couple months!! 😱

It feels like it was at least two years ago to me.

@everyone

Ok, you guys can totally continue this and have fun, but I’m not going to be running the games anymore cuz I had no idea what I was doing and I’ve run out of motivation. Also, I’m pulling my characters…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

XD Has school started again for you yet? (…If you’re still in school?)

No. By some miracle, I graduated last year, and I’m not doing college, at least not yet.

Oh my word this was so long agooo!! It will be a year in a couple months!! 😱

@whalekeeper

Thank you, thank you. *bows again because why not* You should get one too. Does wonders for writing muscle. (That’s only what I’ve heard… still haven’t seen it work yet… 🧐)

Gosh darn it I was hoping everyone had forgotten about this XD

@whalekeeper Lol pretty much exactly the same here. Lots of drawing, not much of anything else. Except no one’s calling me edgy, though I probably am. XD

File-476 of Catalogue 221: Anomaly-6097

Name: [The Painter]

Origin: unknown

Direct sightings: none

Signature sightings: 9

Description: The Painter has never been seen directly, but signs of its work have been documented. Walls have been found painted unevenly in colors described by witnesses as “…the colors of everything…” and “…an…[Read more]

@acancello

Yes, exactly. You cant make 100% of the people happy 100% of the time. The moon was launched around 20 years before the book takes place so the riots and mobs of angry protesters have calmed down. Also, before electricity prices were skyrocketing due to the amount they were using with all of the new technology (Most everything switched…

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@jonas

I’m probably not going to be the best at giving advice on color and character. Color I feel is arbitrary unless there’s something special about it, like the combination of the two metrics in some way. Character we’ve discussed in the past in many ways. I’m not really sure what advice I could give that you don’t already know.

As for the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I haven’t read it yet, but I’ll probably get to it sometime today!

@savannah_grace2009

Let’s gooooo!!!!! Congratulations!!!