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@savannah_grace2009

I’m so confused now.😂

Naturally Eloy is angry at his brother for everything he did, so he builds up anger, and then instead of stepping in front of Cass to die in his place, he HESITATES. So the opportunity is lost and Cass dies, when Eloy could have saved him.

So now Eloy has to live with the guilt that he should have and…

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@theducktator

I feel like I should have some long drawn out post since one of my first for real novels was dystopian, but it seriously needs a lot of work, so I only have one short piece of advice for you. 😉

Don’t limit your scope. A lot of times dystopia takes place in a world/country similar to America, right? Don’t tie yourself down to tha…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle
Yep! Sorry, my post was a little late, lol

@ellette-giselle

Oooh, he looks so cool!!

@rae

Poor Nahim. Imagine being a tomato…ugh.😂 I don’t like tomatoes. What do you usually eat for breakfast?

@savannah_grace2009

Sef and Lilitu are adorable, dandelions are beautiful, and Eloy is way better than Cassian. AND YOU INCLUDED THE TOAD. OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!! I’M SO HAPPY!!!!!!

Sister: “What’s a cheese monger?”

Me: “It’s like a haberdasher, but with cheese instead of hats.”

@keilah-h

You’re welcome!

oop I see I already thanked you. sorry. XD

Lol.

@highscribeofaetherium

Ouch. 😂

@savannah_grace2009

At first I didn’t like Eloy either…but I felt bad for him so now I do XD

It’s hard to dislike characters I feel bad for.

@highscribeofaetherium

 Poor Lilitu, though XD getting hot soup sloshed over you is no fun.

How do you know this?😂

I still don’t like Eloy, he’s a grump.

Poor guy’s family keeps forgetting he exists. Maybe he’d be in a better mood if people actually cared about him.

@theducktator

Thanks for reminding me! I’ll have it out this week!

@grcr @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009

Praying for all of you ladies!! ❤️

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, she definitely needs a stuffed toad. Named Bartholomew, or Lollihops, or Snugglepie, or Melchizedek. And maybe some chocolate.

@savannah_grace2009

Oh no. I liked you, Cassian! Don’t hurt Sef, she’s gone through a lot. (And will go through more, since she’s the main character.) Lilitu, go buy your girl a comfort stuffie. Maybe a toad?

@savannah_grace2009

HE’S DOING IT INTENTIONALLY?!?! I THOUGHT HE WAS OBLIVIOUS! CASSIAN, DON’T YOU DARE BREAK SEF’S HEART. LILITU IS WAY MORE DESERVING OF HER.

Yeah, I like Eloy. How old is he again?

@savannah_grace2009

Lilitu!🤣🤣🤣 Oh my goodness, it’s The Great Soup Incident! Poor forgotten Eloy, though.😞

@mineralizedwritings

OMG YASSSSSSS!!!! ZUKOOOOO!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! HE LOOKS ADORABLE!!!

Great job Min!!!!