Lydibug

@theducktator

Your signature is a mood.

Also I can ask your character a few questions if you want

@loopylin

😡 Are you trying to test our friendship or somethin?!?

@loopylin

Nope!

@everyone I will get back to this after I finish an over-thought-out expression sketch for one of my characters.

*then

Also I’ve been binge watching doctor who so that’s probably what’s filling up the story portion of my brain

@whalekeeper

Nah, you’re good. Take your time. I haven’t been in a rp writing mood or an artistic mood at all recently. Work and social activities have been draining all my energy.

@theducktator

Yep. If you ask for an interviewer (if no one else will, than I will).

Sorry @loopylin and @calyhuge for not continuing; I’m in more of an artistic mood this month and the words are. Not. Flowing.

I know you guys are here so I’ll come back to this soon.

@loopylin

I saw what you wrote and I agree with that too 😛

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009
XD I’m glad I’m actually making some sense

@whaley

I can understand why it’s tempting to write a character getting their way though.

Maybe it’s because we relate to our own characters so much? And we like getting what we want.

But that’s also how God judges people.
“Your will be done.”

But idk I haven’t t…[Read more]

@theshadow

Thanks for the support XD

@savannah_grace2009

Girlll for a second I was scared you were gonna talk about my story and I was scared XD

Look girl, you stay confident and keep writing, okay? 😊 Once upon a time, each of us probably had a dark phase, and may still be going through it. Maybe your story started that way, but now, you seem…[Read more]

@rae
Just to clarify, I think that Chase having that flaw makes him a good and realistic character. I’m not critiquing his flaw, I’m critiquing that it’s being shown as a virtue.

@loopylin

Girl are you psychic or something? Because I couldn’t figure out exactly how I felt about Chase’s sacrifice until you just voiced it. That’s exactly what I was trying to say 😂 I can understand why it’s tempting to write a character getting their way though. It’s basically their element, even though it’s a flaw.

@savannah_grace2009 Yayy :]

Why do I always either not respond to these things, or respond with 3+ giant paragraphs?? There’s pretty much no in between XD

@theducktator 8 or 9

@rae

Ok, first off, I love Jenny and also how you made the unicorn have cloven hooves.

I do have some critiques, though. Sorry if they aren’t helpful.

I don’t think giving your characters what they want is a good idea, unless you’re writing a tragedy. If I gave Ellie the safety that she wanted, she would isolate herse…[Read more]

I found a dumb song that made me giggle called I Am Steve by Hey Steve

Been listening to it on repeat XD

@rae

Aww, I loved it!!

The only thing I’d recommend is to really deepen Chase’s pov, especially after he gives up his sight. Because it still felt like he could see with the way things were described. I think if you describe it in the way in which Chase was experiencing it, then it will have a much bigger impact.

Other than that it was good! (:

What made it decisive in my head, was Chase actually wanted this to happen. Sure, he would have avoided it in the story, but the Chase in my head told me that this all must happen.

I get that. He did however already sacrifice his mobility so maybe it just feels redundant to me.

It helps to keep some tether on the character’s mind even if you feel…[Read more]

Guys, I am so in love with plotting right now. It can be so fun. Just need to say it somewhere. 😛