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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Plus, one of my beta readers is a YouTuber
That’s something I’ve never heard before XD
It’s also going to be very interesting because she is a self-professed therian, but is already a fan of my art and Baron (she literally made fanart of him)
Nor have I heard that. You’ve found a diverse pool of beta readers.
I’ve been on KP for over two yea…
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m gonna wait for Keilah to rp
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Yes. I have two confirmed beta readers at the moment, plus a friend who I’m going to ask, and someone who I have to double check with (because they are not Christian, and they said they would be okay reading it, but I want to make sure. I really don’t want them to feel forced into something.)
Nice. How long…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh wow! Are these beta readers for Baron Chronicles? I didn’t know you were that far along in the editing process.
Lucille
The foliage was so thick that they sat in relative comfort underneath it. It was like standing under the awning of a shop. The wood creaked up and down, like a oak and glass door, opening and shutting under…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@theducktator I plan on replying eventually. Sorry for taking so long
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Loopy replied to the topic The mailbox! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
To: Flax, 21st Palace avenue Guest unit #5
From: Brea Thorne, Thorne Mansion, N. Elm Street, Linmaus
Dear Flax,
I am busy with many things such as school and piano lessons and taking care of Mother. It is a lot, and I don’t want to fall behind in my studies. I suppose writing to you won’t be such a waste of time,…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The All-Boys Royal Academy AU RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
LoisThe clock turned to five, and some of the students cheered as a tall man stepped up to the podium at the front of the room. He smiled pleasantly and held up a hand to silence them.
“Please, everyone, take a seat. I know you all are very hungry and tired from your travels here, so I will try to make this quick. I am H…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@theducktator @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon
Lois
Lois turned away from his short interaction with Viktor, to see a teammate go down with a ball to the face. He looked to where the ball came from, and saw Felicity, standing near the front of her team. She winked at him, then threw two more balls in quick succession, one at him and one at Viktor.…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
“I think the hardest thing about jumping off a bridge would be deciding whether to do a front flip or a back flip.” -my friend’s brother
“Are trees categorically considered plants?”-a coworker
“I’m jealous of my shoes.” -My cousin
“Autism is a spectrum, selfishness is just a thing.” -My dad
My cousin, texting me: “You simpil tun”
Me:…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper Hehe I love that
Speaking of funny quotes, I do have some from you…
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
XD
Dante
The chair moved down the sidewalk a couple yards before slowly rolling to a stop. Dante turned to see Rory’s puzzled expression, and then burst out laughing. Then he doubled over, holding his side.
“Heh, ow, hehe… there’s no way that wasn’t a bit,” he said, barely managing to hold back more laughter. “Seriou…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
None of that sounded like a definite answer, so Lucy shrugged. She was just as interested in becoming a secretary, anyway.
A clap of thunder rumbled in the distance. Bugs chirped louder as if getting their last voices in before something louder arrived. Gabriel and Lucy sped up, jogging over leaf piles and patches of heather.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Because she’s a diva? 🤣
Lucille
For a while, neither of them had anything to say. Lucy slipped the leather cover onto the hatchet, and they moved on, the tree’s fallen leaves trailing behind them. While they had spent time there, a darker mass of clouds had approached on the horizon and the wind howled somewhere above their heads.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Broooo I just realized you and Rumi from K-Pop Demon Hunters would get along
Lucille
“You save their butts from dying and they hate you because of irregularly distributed pigmentation? These people sound stupid. Chihuahua brains. You should ditch them.”
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Dante
“They’re… exactly what they sound like. Just set me down in that one over there. It will look less weird than you carrying me.”
Rory did, and Dante tried his best to not let any pain show while moving. He settled into the seat and looked around until he figured out how to unlock the breaks. The chair rolled forward a lit…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I figured something like that lol
Lucille
“Huh. Okay.” She threw the hatchet again and succeeded. “Why don’t you tell your – uh – friends what you’re really doing?”
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy pulled the hatchet out of the tree. Her cheeks glowed red from the effort and her arms felt good from the exercise. She cradled the head in one hand and the handle in the other, striding back to Gabriel.
She didn’t smile very much, not doing so on the best of days, but gave him all of her eyes’ attention. “Is Isabella your sweetheart?”
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
“Bet they wanted you because you’d win.”
She stepped forward, gray eyes focused sharply on the tree, and the hatchet sunk into the bark.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
It soon became obvious that Lucy had less trouble using her own strength than quelling it. Every time she threw the hatchet, she overshot and sent it zinging back over the stoned ground.
But aiming seemed like a more important thing to get right, and after a couple tries, she remembered to pause and focus on the tree. She hit the…[Read more]
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